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  • SillyFrench

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    nice update, but can't wait to actually get into the case :)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 09:46am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved the update! <3
    June 23rd, 2012 at 08:01am
  • moviemaniac888

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    Long time no talk. :D

    I really enjoyed the update, Rylee and Brian's banter was so adorable and I love how they tease each other. I really like where you are going with this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
    May 25th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • SillyFrench

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    It's always nice to see that you updated one of your stories. And I'm glad it was this one :)
    It's allright you know, don't feel too pressured to update, we're all busy it seems. ^_^"
    Anyway, it was a nice update, can't wait to see them working on the case "for real" =)
    May 25th, 2011 at 05:28pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Cute update, I loved it! <3
    May 22nd, 2011 at 05:18am
  • pjrox

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    I'm loving this story :) x
    November 23rd, 2010 at 10:51am
  • avenging angel

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    Freaking awesome!!can't wait for more!!!
    November 22nd, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Awesome update! I loved it!
    Can't wait for the next one! <3
    November 20th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update :)
    November 17th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • SillyFrench

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    thank you for the update,
    this story is keeping me on my toes, I look forward to read more =D
    November 17th, 2010 at 05:38pm
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    this one is getting really intense already! =)

    i love it! =)
    November 17th, 2010 at 03:44pm
  • SillyFrench

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    I liked the chapter. Looking forward to the nexts ones, I'm curious about the outcome :)
    Sorry I didn't comment sooner, I was kinda busy ^^"
    Loved it, can't wait for more!! =D
    July 23rd, 2010 at 08:42pm
  • Music...and...Poetry

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    Awesome possum!
    July 22nd, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    loved the update!
    cant wait for more!
    July 21st, 2010 at 05:06am
  • Freak Out

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    FINALLY! ONTO THE CASE!
    so, really sorry about last, super long and stressful day.

    Anyway! I'm excited to get this puppy rollin'!
    July 18th, 2010 at 09:00pm
  • hachie

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    Wow Brian really cares for her.
    They make the perfect couple, other than Matt and Kay.
    I can't wait for the next chapter to find out more about the serial killer!
    I look forward to the next update!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    July 18th, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • Somehow.Saving.You

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    Gos I love it! Its great how you've used the guys to write a different type of fanfic and a brilliant one at that. I mean I've only read the three chapters so far but already I'm hooked. Seriously if this is the beginning then I cant wait to see what happens when they close in on him. Please update soon =D
    xXx
    July 18th, 2010 at 11:50am
  • Morning.Love

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    Loved this chapter!!! This story is really different from any other story and it keeps getting better!!
    July 18th, 2010 at 09:10am
  • ReviveMeSoon.

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    Oh mah Gash.
    This is getting sooo good :)
    "I must look like I had slept with a hanger in my mouth; I just can’t stop smiling at him." That part made me smile for some reason, haha.
    Can't wait for more!
    July 14th, 2010 at 06:17am
  • hachie

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    Wow I love your Brian story!!!!!!!!!!
    The suspends is building!
    I can't wait for your next update, hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!! XD
    July 10th, 2010 at 08:55pm
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