Watched, Tortured, Fallen - Comments

nice update, but can't wait to actually get into the case :)

Loved the update! <3

Long time no talk. :D

I really enjoyed the update, Rylee and Brian's banter was so adorable and I love how they tease each other. I really like where you are going with this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

It's always nice to see that you updated one of your stories. And I'm glad it was this one :)
It's allright you know, don't feel too pressured to update, we're all busy it seems. ^_^"
Anyway, it was a nice update, can't wait to see them working on the case "for real" =)

Cute update, I loved it! <3

I'm loving this story :) x

Freaking awesome!!can't wait for more!!!

Awesome update! I loved it!
Can't wait for the next one! <3

Amazing update :)

thank you for the update,
this story is keeping me on my toes, I look forward to read more =D

this one is getting really intense already! =)

i love it! =)

I liked the chapter. Looking forward to the nexts ones, I'm curious about the outcome :)
Sorry I didn't comment sooner, I was kinda busy ^^"
Loved it, can't wait for more!! =D

Awesome possum!

loved the update!
cant wait for more!

FINALLY! ONTO THE CASE!
so, really sorry about last, super long and stressful day.

Anyway! I'm excited to get this puppy rollin'!

Wow Brian really cares for her.
They make the perfect couple, other than Matt and Kay.
I can't wait for the next chapter to find out more about the serial killer!
I look forward to the next update!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Gos I love it! Its great how you've used the guys to write a different type of fanfic and a brilliant one at that. I mean I've only read the three chapters so far but already I'm hooked. Seriously if this is the beginning then I cant wait to see what happens when they close in on him. Please update soon =D
xXx

Loved this chapter!!! This story is really different from any other story and it keeps getting better!!

Oh mah Gash.
This is getting sooo good :)
"I must look like I had slept with a hanger in my mouth; I just can’t stop smiling at him." That part made me smile for some reason, haha.
Can't wait for more!

Wow I love your Brian story!!!!!!!!!!
The suspends is building!
I can't wait for your next update, hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!! XD