Watched, Tortured, Fallen - Comments

I love this story so far, it's different than anything I have seen in awhile. I love how protective Brian is, even though Rylee seems very hard headed . Can't wait for more :)

Oh my God, Angel. This update was amazing! I must admit, I am scared for Rylee, but I will get to that in a moment. You already know that I adore the way you write, but this update was just lovely. Very nice job! :)

I love how Brian’s super protective of Rylee; it’s really cute, and in a case like this, it’s certainly needed. I think it’s amazing how he can read her like that, knowing what she was going to do with that case file even before she herself did. I like how she’s not completely desensitized from the cases. I would imagine that after a while, you’d certainly get used to it to some degree, but not all the way. I like how you portray everyone’s actions, reactions, and how they speak. It just seems very realistic, and I applaud you for that.

And you know what else? Jimmy is adorable in this. I mean, I know I’m totally biased, but when he got nervous I got all giggly and now I wanna know what he wanted to talk to Rylee about! Haha. I have a general idea, but I have been wrong many, many times before. Haha.

This story is definitely one of my favorites with the way you write, the characters, and how you do it all. Great job! <3

Loved the update!

awesome update.

Jimmy and Missy are so adorable! I see a new relationship on the horizon! and Brian was being all protective, what a good boyfriend, but you got to let the girl do her job Bri. haha.

and I liked the term Victimology. I looked it up after reading this, it is a really cool term that I had never heard before.

I'm really liking this story, I took forensics and really enjoy Crime Dramas on TV so this has kind of a mix of all of them, as well as a love story.

Can't wait to see what happens when they get to Nebraska. And don't worry about taking a while to update Angel, I totally understand with the whole update thing, life has been hectic and never seems to slow down anymore...

loved the update though. :D

I love how protective Brian is...cant wait for the next one!

All right, I kind of have a bad feeling about this case.. ><"
I'm glad you got to update even though you're really busy.
I loved the update and I look forward to more :)

so... this chapter sold the story to me. i cant tell you why because i dont know, but i officially subscribed to it. it was a good update and the ending was fine.

AWWWWWWWW

I loved it!!

It's getting interesting now :) Its a nice change from the ones I usually read.

great chapter ;)
loved it, looking forward to more!

You, Angel, write very nice smut, just for the record. And when Rylee said that Brian wore her out, I actually giggled. You know me - I hardly ever giggle, and this made me do it! Kudos for making me do that, love! Haha.

"No one’s around, we aren’t going to get in trouble,” he assures me, running his long fingers through my hair.

Ooh, when you said that, I knew that someone was going to pop out and say something. Though, I didn't think that it was going to be me - I thought it was going to be that horrible Joanna. Haha.

“So, how are things with you and the doctor going?” I ask with a smirk. “Are they well?”

I'm not going to lie to you, Angel; I squealed when I read that, and it got that much louder when I read that I blushed. You know me far too well! Haha.

“Hi, Jimmy,” Missy smiles and I notice a smile pull at Jimmy’s face.

Jimmy and Missy have been flirting with each other for the last few months and it’s really rather adorable. I just wish that they would tell each other that they like each other already. Everyone can see it and it’s a wonder that they can’t.

Good lord! Alright, the giggling spree just will not end with this update! What's up with that? Haha. But I love how you're portraying Jimmy and I to be all cute and ignorant to the other's feelings and stuff. Haha.

Oh, gosh! But I'm really freaked out as to what the new case is going to say and what it's all about. I just... I'm worried for everyone in there with this new case, and I'm on edge here. I'm also curious to see what the others' reactions are going to be. You're doing a wonderful job with this, and I'm lookin' forward to more! :D

this is really good :) update soon please.

ps,
your smex scenes are seriously progressing. they werent bad before but now its like "DAYUM!"

I'd just like you to remember that in california you were two hours ahead of midnight.

ANYWAY!
So, you werent kidding when you said they werent getting out of bed! lol. I found this chapter far more attention grabbing than the first one, not that the first chapter was boring, it just wasnt AS interesting. anyway, I think I'll subscribe now. <3 keep it up bebe.

I'm so glad you updated =D
Don't worry about how long it takes, life can be pretty busy sometimes :)
Loved the update, and I look forward to more!

Ok, that sex scene between Brian and Riley was H-O-T. Hot. Jeeze Angel, you outdid yourself with that one, that scene was almost 3/4 of the chapter. I liked it. ;D

And I loved the introduction of the gang/team. I think it is going to be great seeing the relationships between each of the characters and what each member contributes during a case. I also like how there are romances within the group and they all watch each others backs. A true family.

Loved the chapter, and don't worry about taking so long, we all understand that life gets busy, I'm just always happy to read whatever you write, and I am really enjoying this new story. Crime dramas are the big thing right now in TV between Law and Order, CSI, and Criminal Minds, so it is pretty cool to see you bring that into an Avenged Story.

Yes!
ThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyou

I loved it babes!

oh wow!!!!
i found this story and wow! lol i love it!
i mean its a7x meets criminal minds/num3rs...nothing could be better lol
so i deffinatly think you should update like now =P