Sleepyhead - Comments

I read this when you first put it up, and I still think about it. It's absolutely beautiful and there's just so much emotion in it, it's wonderful.

Guess what?
I'm re-reading it. Lol

Hands down one of my fave stories on this site. Which means I love you uberly much for writing it out, posting it, and not taking it down lol =]

i think that i'm just going to pretend that last bit didn't happen and he went to Dave
and Alex understood
because he didn't love him

Because I Truely Loved The Haunting I Wanted To Check Ur Other Stories And WOW :O
Ur Rlly Talented Like No Joke :O
Sleepyhead Is So Beautiful Im Still Reading It And Couldn't Wait To Comment :D <3
I Really Love Ur Writing Style It's So Different In A Good Way I Wish There Are More Authors Like You On Here .. :)

I am truthfully sorry that I had not found this story sooner.
I've just finished the first chapter and I couldn't wait to comment.
:)
You have got a regular commenter on your hands.

So, I finally got time to finish reading this, and it has to be one of the best things I've read in a really long time.
I really liked the ending... I was hoping through the whole story that Felix would end up with Alex. Alex was my favourite character... Even if he was a bit over-defensive about his narcolepsy.

I'm sad now, I really didn't want this story to end...

I hate the ending. It shocked me...and then wanted to cry. It's not right lol.
I loved it, but I was a Dave supporter too.
I feel so empty.
I know it's realistic and everything, but....it's sad.

I liked the ending of chapter 7. I was getting really worried there, lol.
<3 <3 <3

Oh my goodness, the ending made me cry. That letter dave wrote to felix brought some serious tears to my eyes; it was absolutely perfect. It was soooo good and i was really hoping he would end up with dave. And when he didn't, i cried some more. But i understand why he made that fucking mistake, he always makes the wrong decision. I freaking LOVED this story with everything i have. I seriously think it broke my heart. No joke. I realllllllllyyyy loved it. Even though it broke me. :)
xox

-wants to die from the awkward tension between dave and felix-
Just read chap6. And let me say, dsjbgkebkdjbnljbadnbs;mbs;fnkrpbklr.

OK, aside from that, I loved it. Frustration with the"omgthisisinsaneandblah" made me write what was above. ^_^"

Love your writing =]

Sooo....I absolutely love this story. It's addicting, but not like other stories I've read. I'm on capter five now, kudos on this ;P

This story is beautiful and your words are grand, but I can't stop feeling that everyone died in the end.

Just incredible.
<3

That was an incredible story.
It was, light, and other-worldly. Like it wasn't really from a life here on Earth.
It was really beautiful. Everything flowed exceptionally well- and it just fit together so perfectly.
I wished he had picked Dave, but I understand that making him chase after him would just be wrong for his character.
So, Alex was a fine choice.
I really enjoyed Sarah's character. She was so dreamy and rather- displaced and very dislodged from the world, at the beginning of the story. But she had another part of her, I think. I like that about her.
Honestly your story was amazing- I truly loved reading it.
<3:)

I loved the ending so much. I think it was the fact that I've personally never been a fan of 'happy' endings where everything works out perfect and they live happily ever after, so I found the more practical, and realistic ending of this wonderful.

I loved Dave since the beginning, and although I really felt quite awful for him throughout the story, it just wouldn't work. Alex was so complex and problematic with his sleep disorder, and Felix just seemed to be drawn to those type of people. I don't know, but I always felt like Felix wanted to have someone that was just as 'messed up' as him so he didn't feel so odd about his own sleeping problems.

And the car leaving at the end made it all just so much better. I'm happy Felix didn't chase after Dave in the end, it would make it seem false in a sense.

Anyways, I'll sum it up before I end up writing you an essay, I adored this story, and I really hope you'll be writing more stories soon. <3

woah. the end? it was kind of abrupt. i went down to read the author's note and when i saw it was the end at first i was kind of like wtf? really? i don't see alex as being a mistake...

soooo i basically cried the entire time i was reading the last chapter..lol!
...i can't believe it...
i'm seriously in shock and don't know what to say..
great story...maybe a sequel (i doubt you will but i just thought i'd ask..maybe something with dan?)

I just knew this was based off of "Sleepyhead" by Passion Pit!
That song is amazing, and flawless like this story.
I just have to tell you this story is one of my all time favorites on here, and I'm planning on copying and pasting it into a word document so I can print it out and read it whenever I want. It's dreamy, and your writing is utterly astounding to me. You describe the feelings, the true texture and fabric of a story without completely overdoing it. You're an amazing writer, and I look forward to more of your stories!
(p.s. / although I'm sure some didn't like it, I adored the ending. It fit wonderously.)

OH! and you are in BIG trouble for finishing the story!!!!
OMFGWTF!!!!
but yeah. it was an awesome story. and I loved every second of it. Message me when you write another and I'll be here in a flash!!! or a click of a mouse button... but i can click pretty fast!

aww that was so sweet! I need a moment....
aaaaaaaaaaaand Its over Lol
Its was really good. full of emotion and choice. I love how you take the time to describe everything Felix is feeling, and how he connects it with past events! LOVE IT