ahhhh! i LOVED the drama in this one.. kept me on the edge of my seat..i'm shocked dave told him.. i can understand why flick is freakin' out..i feel bad for him right now
i hope he can make a choice that will give him some peace so he can finally go home at night and sleep without and fears. poor felix
well well well... we finally know what's wrong with alex...very interesting. i can't wait to see what becomes of that. i hope that car incident wasn't forshadowing what could come. still...alex is a jerk for just leaving felix with drunk dave (which i thought was hilarious btw) can't wait for more ^^
Okay, I'm only on chapter six, but I felt the need to comment. This story is amazing. The way you write reminds me of Owl City, I love it. A person can get lost in this story.
I absolutely LOVED the imagery and description you used when Flick was talking about Alex. it was powerful and emotional, and terribly uplifting! It was like i could picture it in my brain, and i could actually feel what you were describing! I loved it! Bravo! :P
Yay for drama at the end. Poor Flick. I kinda feel empathetic towards Dave though. Poor guy.
Wow chapter 18 already! Despite the reasonable gaps inbetween the chapters it still doesn't feel that long since the first chapter! Aww I liked this chapter. A little more heated, with serious undertones from Dave. I'm really intrigued to see what will happen between him and Felix ^_^
Dudeee. I love it :3 Too tired to type lots, so I'm just going to say that you're an amazing writer. You probably know this though, so hehe. This chapter was beautiful, even though there was a breakup involved. It really was. I could just ~see it happening and oh man. This story makes me :3 like I don't even know what I'm saying anymore. All I know is that I want more. <3
Two updates in two days, I'm very impressed! I'm really starting to love Dave's character as the story goes on, though Felix and Alex are undoubtedly my favorites. Great updates (:
Aww I thought it was sweet the way he was obsessing over the kiss WHICH was epicly awesome by the way I ALSO loved how you spiced up the Drama with Dave's Rage. Kudos to you ^_^