I'm not gonna lie; I cried. And with Alley Cat by Owl and Penny playing in the background while reading this did not help at all. This will always be one of my favorite stories.
no no no just no that can't be the end! That really like broke my heart, and not even because he didn't choose dave I think it was more because he did choose alex. I guess 'i could learn to love you' is preferable to 'i love you enough to leave so that you can be hapy'
I can't believe my stupid email put this in the spam folder!!! I had no idea it was there!!! I'm soooo mad! Stupid email. Grr. But anyways, i was soooooooo good! And seriously, i think i've said this before, but some of the things you say "...filling our lungs with the tragedy of sinking ships..." (i think it was something like that, sorry if i didn't remember correctly) for example, gives me chills. It just souds so...beautiful i guess. So good. :) xox
This story takes me to La-La-Land, but only in the best kind of way. I've never read a story that gave me such feelings. You send shivers up my spine. Thank you.
Ahh... I do love your writing style, it's amazing =] I like this chapter, Felix is absolutley certain he's going to put things right :] Also, I hope you had a good birthday!
As always, lovely. It's so goood. Happy Birthday!!! I'm not exactly sure when it was because i hardly check my email, so i'm pretty sure i got this update notification late, but, WOOOHOOOO!!! anyway. XD xox
^_^ Felix has some real determination at the end of this chapter, and his bundle of thoughts are both confusing and easy to relate to! Although this isn't my favourite chapter so far, its very well written as is your way WHICH IS TOTALLY AWESOME
I know i commented on this story already, but now i'm finished with the chapters, and i'm not sure if i told you this; I am in LOVE with this story. I love it. It is sooooo gooood. :) And i had a hunch that Dave was in love with Felix. I was really kind of excited when he said it. I could just tell he was. :) But i don't like how Felix reacted. :( Oh well. I hope it ends up the way i want it. ;) Pleeeaase update soon! :) xox
I am really super mad right now. And it's not at your story. I think this story is amazing, even though i have only gotten to read two chapters. I really like it. I'm mad because i am being forced to stop reading it by father time and daylight savings, because they're both a bitch. School is tomorrow and 7:15 comes fast. I will have to finish reading it tomorrow. I'll be anticipating it all day. No joke, i really love it. :) xox
Oh man, I should really start reading those orange banners. I freaked out for a second thinking you'd deleted chapters, but once I read the first paragraph I kind of caught on. It wasn't until I scrolled up to comment that I noticed it ahah.
Anyways, I really liked this chapter. The drama isn't overdone and cliche like a lot of stories are. I absolutely loved that flower story bit. There was something so sweet, simple, and heart wrenching about it. I dunno, maybe I'm just too emotional over bits like that ahah. Poor Dave, always getting hurt :c I really do love Dave, but I just can't see him and Felix ever working out to be anything romantic. Although you never know! I'm excited to see how the little love triangle works out. (:
ive been meaning to comment on this forever but i keep forgetting. sorry:( anyways i love love love this story especially with the all the new drama. can't wait for more!!!
aww. The only one who didn't see that coming was Flick lol Once again you amaze me at your writing ability. Everything was so well described, and perfectly put across! I love it!