Sleepyhead - Comments

poor dave, noone wants to fall in love alone.

ahhhh! i LOVED the drama in this one..
kept me on the edge of my seat..i'm shocked dave told him..
i can understand why flick is freakin' out..i feel bad for him right now

i hope he can make a choice that will give him some peace so he can finally go home at night and sleep without and fears. poor felix

well well well...
we finally know what's wrong with alex...very interesting. i can't wait to see what becomes of that. i hope that car incident wasn't forshadowing what could come.
still...alex is a jerk for just leaving felix with drunk dave (which i thought was hilarious btw)
can't wait for more ^^

Okay, I'm only on chapter six, but I felt the need to comment. This story is amazing. The way you write reminds me of Owl City, I love it. A person can get lost in this story.

I think I like Harold best out of the four.

I absolutely LOVED the imagery and description you used when Flick was talking about Alex. it was powerful and emotional, and terribly uplifting! It was like i could picture it in my brain, and i could actually feel what you were describing! I loved it! Bravo! :P

Yay for drama at the end. Poor Flick. I kinda feel empathetic towards Dave though. Poor guy.

lol i don't understand how there are alex supporters..
this chapter made me hate him even more
go d! :)

:D

Wow chapter 18 already! Despite the reasonable gaps inbetween the chapters it still doesn't feel that long since the first chapter!
Aww I liked this chapter. A little more heated, with serious undertones from Dave. I'm really intrigued to see what will happen between him and Felix ^_^

Poor Flick, I don't like Alex- Dave will Always get my vote...

I don't even know what to say anymore.
It's just damn beautiful <3 everything is.

He's all bloody. D:

Such an inocuous title for what is definately one of the best stories I have read on this site. Congratulations!

Dudeee. I love it :3
Too tired to type lots, so I'm just going to say that you're an amazing writer. You probably know this though, so hehe. This chapter was beautiful, even though there was a breakup involved. It really was. I could just ~see it happening and oh man. This story makes me :3 like I don't even know what I'm saying anymore. All I know is that I want more. <3

i AM impressed :) but damn i am in loves with this story. no doubt my favorite, your writing is fantastic!

i AM impressed :) but damn i am in loves with this story. no doubt my favorite, your writing is fantastic!

Two updates in two days, I'm very impressed!
I'm really starting to love Dave's character as the story goes on, though Felix and Alex are undoubtedly my favorites.
Great updates (:

This kid is, like... really messed up.

Aww I thought it was sweet the way he was obsessing over the kiss WHICH was epicly awesome by the way
I ALSO loved how you spiced up the Drama with Dave's Rage. Kudos to you ^_^

So. I just read this.
And I think it's amazing.