The Last Goodbye - Comments

That has to be my fave chapter so far!
Aw Raylene and Pat so cute.
Haha Pat and Adam so funny.
Oh damn Pat kissed her.totally didn't expect that.
Hmmm i wonder what's going to happen if or
when Adam finds out.
More soon! =]

Ohhh, there's the drama.
Looooove it.
That was cute with Raylene & Pat.
And of course Pat & Adam would start some sort of childish arguement...boys.
Ahhhh, he kissed her.
I can't believe he actually did that.
More soon. <3

One of my favourites so far, too! Things are finally heating up and I can't wait for more, especially what will happen if/when Adam finds out. :)

Finally! This is the chapter I've been waiting for =]

I like how Kaner was like a little kid on Christmas morning running to the rink. That was adorable!

More soon?

Xd i love this story it is really really good
lol at how you made one of the girls like 5 inches taller than him XD

I'm pretty certain I hate most of the girls on this show.
And you guys eat waffles for breakfast? We never really see them here, but I've had them once or twice and they're really sickly. But I can just imagine Adam wolfing them down, haha.
I'm still trying to work out whether Delaney likes Patrick, or Adam, or both, or none! Or maybe she's a lesbian and will hook up with one of the girls; I wouldn't put it past you to surprise us like that!

Again I would be on the show in a heartbeat! lol

Oh Adam...without him life would be so boring.
Can't wait for things to get even more interesting! =]

I am loving it, Burr and Kaner fighting over Delaney, secretly though. Love it, and all the other girls make me laugh. Loving it!

Burish reminds me SO much of my best friend, it`s frightening.
Love this so much.

Oh Adam...you're my fave.
I love how he was all apt to help the girls that Kaner couldn't help.
Can't wait for things to get even more interesting! <3

Now Robin's going to walk in on the love making?
Dang it, I thought Raylene would be th\e girl who gets the rose and Delaney would... Well, yeah, you know my Delaney prediction.
Even though she's totally playing Bur and PK right now.
She totally wants to skate with them and melt the ice with their intense burning love.
Love triangle much, Erin?

Hahahaha, I WAS RIGHT!
Yes, now for them doing the dirty in a closet with Raylene walking in...
Then Hossa...
Then,, Yeah, you catch my drift

Ahh yay! The end of this chapter is what I've been waiting for!!

Well well well Mr Kane, moving in on your friend's girl. I knew it! Ish.
So now I know he likes her, but does she like him? And what about Raylene?
You know what Erin, you'll just have to stop watching Everton for a minute and update this again to put my mind at ease!

Lmfao, I loved how he had to stand on his tip toes to reach the girl's cheek. Awh, Patty and his height issues.
I'm interested to see what goes down with the whole Delaney-Pat-Bur triangle here. For some reason I don't see Bur taking it to well that PK is taking an interest in his woman (; But then again, I guess Bur's not one to get too attached... but I could be wrong!
Can't wait for more!

awww patty! mmm

OH MY GOD, Kaner had to stand on his tip toes to kiss one of them!! OMFG. HAHAHAHA. I love him.

HAYYY, DECEMBER 14th IS MY MOM'S BIRTHDAY. Hahahahaha. Sorry, totally unnecessary. LOL.

And the little thing where Kaner confessed he wanted to be a car dealer, omg. So classic. CAN YOU IMAGINE GOING TO A DEALERSHIP AND HAVE KANER APPROACH YOU AND TRY TO SELL YOU A CAR? Oh Godddd.

Mmmmhm, told you Kaner wanted some of that. It's nice that he's respecting his teammate's dibs though, haha.

For now, anyways.

“Hell yes, I’ll stay!” she exclaimed, as Patrick had to stand on his toes in order to reach her cheek to kiss, as she was nearly eight inches taller than him.
LMAO.
Kaner is a shrimp...I still think he's been lying about his height.
Badgers+Blackhawks+Pens fan=badass.
Delany is awesome.
"I wasn’t,” Patrick repeated. “I was actually thinking of a different Blackhawks player you’d be good for,” he muttered under his breath, realizing for the first time that he was slowly falling for Delaney himself.
Ohhhhh, I knew it.
More soon. <3