The Last Goodbye - Comments

Ok well first off wow! Second yaya raylene is still there I still have hope

PAT IS A MEMBER OF THE MILE HIGH CLUB!
WITH MARIAN!
Just an FYI, I'm awaiting when I show up into the story. ;)
Haha, I'm still Team Rayish.
And Kandie. :)

Ha a Patrick-less date bet the girls didn't see that one coming.
I found it funny how Erica was trying so hard to find the bad side of the girls XD but she is kind of right I mean I bet that if Delaney did an interview with the girls about what the like about Patrick most of them would probably go based on his status and looks XD
anyway great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next
I'm so anxious to see who will end up with who :D

Ohhh Pattycakes la la la la la
Sorry, my brian is fried from watching a two hour play that was entirely in spanish so I can't construct a better comment than that...
But great update! I'm excited for the next one

Yes.
Another update!
Sorry Erica, but the boys are right.
Patty just wants some ass.
Maybe over time it's developed into a little more, though.
More soon. <3

They better not get rid of raylene, she's the only normal one

p.s. what was said about reylene was pretty harsh. foster kids get bounced around alot, even if they are really good kids, I know a couple who went to my school. I think pat should end up with reylene personally

gee erica was starting to sound a little too bitchy. good thing jon calmed it down. please update soon!

...Do you just not think that anyone’s good enough for Kaner, or what?” Jonathan ended his rant.
*cough*Delaney's perfect*cough*

=]

Really like :D

And hmm for relationships;;
I like Delaney with Adam AND Pat.
But that wouldn't work.
I think I like her with Adam more though.
Because she's so Delaney and he's so Adam :) :)

Aha.

Awesome update (Y)

See, I told you you would still update before me =]

I like that Erica, Jon and Brady all get to choose a girl to send home....Kane may think all the girls are hot now, but he won't be saying that when they're eighty and their boobs are dragging on the ground. Now, if only they could get to know Delaney better ;)

I just read all of this now and I love it :D
The plot is so different compared to the normal cliche stuff people have their stories about.
:]

I enjoyed this chapter.
I think it's a great idea to have the 3 of them get to eliminate someone.
Definitely didn't see that coming.
More soon. <3

well I think it was worked out well. it was a good chapter and bringing in other character's opinions was a good idea. I think they should make the two girls who hate reylene leave because reylene seems so nice. but I don't know... good chapter hope you get to updating more regularly again

I loved this chapter. Bring in the family and friends, Kaner saying he's keeping them only because they're hot. Haha, made me smile so much. Can't wait for more.

Hahaha k I loved that chapter!! I can't wait for the next one

I'm sorry I haven't been able to comment on any of your stories for a while :(
I'm really glad you updated this one and it was a really good chapter
I really was not expecting Erica, Jonathan and Brady to show up. It's cool that they will get to decide one girl that leave because they might not all base themselves on looks like Patrick does every once in a while XD
please update soon :D

oouu suprise elimination, kinda puts Kaner on the spot. I'm glad hes still keeping Raylene.
I still don't get why he is keeping Marissa and Rosie i mean even if he keeps them for their looks doesn't change the fact that they are bitches.
and the last paragraph made me curious.

"Patrick quickly apologized to Cameron and Yvette for not choosing them before he left the group of women, just wanting to get away by himself, contemplating whether he made the right choice with who he had chosen to stay."
What exactly does that mean, hmmm
can't wait to read the rest :D

Yayayay!!! Raylenes still there at least!!

umm.okay chapter but more just filler-ish. I would want to know why they did that