The Last Goodbye - Comments

good update, can't wait for the next one.

so, rayish and kandie.
delaney doesn't deserve either of them.

Stuck because you can't figure out who you want Patrick to be with?
Just wondering...
I liked this updated.
That was definitely a twist at the end.
More soon. <3

Leave it to Patrick to be slow on the uptake. And really, keeping those two just for eye candy? Typical man.

And, having watched Burish host the Newlywed Game for BHTV just makes him in this story even more funny now that I can actually picture him doing this stuff =]

This was not a shity update. Just thought you should know. :)
And Kaner needs to start actully..Thinking with the head that has a brain. :)
Like he should judt tell all the girl that Delaney is the one for him and Adam can help Ray. :)
Don'tcha think that'll be amaing. :)

Aww, Adam and Raylene for the win! They're so cute together, I love how he feels the need to defend her. Adam, it's because you like her, duh!

I don't think Delaney would be right with either of them. Adam's too into Ralyene and Pat's too much of a manwhore.

I still think Pat and Raylene are a good couple, though I'm starting to like Adam and Raylene.

I'm sorry, was the RAYISH chapter?
And did I actually ROOT for Rayish? (Oh hold up, I'm not on team Patrick/Delaney yet)
Gahh...
BUT.
BURNEY.
But, I like RAYISH.
But, I don't like Pat and Delaney...
I need to make my entrance into your story... Now

awww... adam and Reylene would be cute together. I'm starting to think that maybe Delaney shouldn't end up with either of them. She doesn't seem right for either of them anymore.

Leave it to Pat to have no memory whatsoever of being an epic douchebag. All the partying he likes to do, you'd think he'd be able to handle his liquor by now.

And, for the record, Kane could totally take Burish. I believe it. That's why he's never had a fight in the NHL...he can;t go showing teams the Hawks' secret weapon.

And, yes.....keep going the way you are with Pat/Delaney and Burish/Raylene =]

Aww, bless Adam's little cotton socks. He likes Raylene :)
And it's nice to see Pat and Delaney getting on well again as well, ties up Delaney so Adam can go after Raylene.
I'm glad you're coming round to my way of thinking :)

Adam liked Raylene!!???? :)
Awhhh.
They'd be good together.
And Pat and Delaney.
You make me want to switch teams!
First i was all PK then Adam now PK again.
Your good woman! :)
Amaing update. More soon.

aww wow that was intense

Patty is like untouchable.
Does no woman ever get angry with him?
Goodness.
More soon. <3

NO NO NO NO NO!
Bur and Delaney, Pat and Raylene!
nuh-uh i can sense(possibly) where your going!
B&D and P&R (:
trust me(:
hahaha cant wait for more
soon please??

So I have no idea who likes who anymore! But I think I want Pat and Delaney to end up together, and Adam and Raylene. Maybe she can be the one to tame his wild ways.

Wow what a... Nce date for Adam and Delaney. It sucks that it didn't turn out well but maybe things will get better for them. And what that waitress did was low
Awwww poor raylene I can't believe that she was defending him and blaming herself.
Why won't kaner realize that he was the asshole in that situtation
<33 Burr's so sweet well except when he was flirting at the restaurant.
Please update soon =]

wow that was the date from hell!!!

and good job adam for punching pat he deserved that. for a second there i thought adam was going to kiss raylene

Patrick=dick lived the updates!

whoah. that was unexpected.
i still think adam and delaney would be a cute couple even though there date didn't work out. and I hope pat apologizes. update again soon!