The Last Goodbye - Comments

Haha. Amazing update. Adam punching Kaner in the stomach was just pure laughter from.
He deserved it though.
And I soo would wanted to kill mu date if it turned out like Delaneys and Adams
so you should do three updates for three days. :)

Loved the update, really good. Can't wait for the next one. Story is full of drama! Loving it!

Aw I'm sad Adam's date didn't turn out well but he did flirt with the waitress.
I wonder how Kaner' going to face Raylene.
Can't wait! =]

Heh.
Adam fucked up just as bad as Kaner.
I think the fact that I was happy about this might mean I'm on team Patrick/Delaney.
For now, that is.
More soon. <3

Oops, I forgot to comment on 15! -
Way to be the biggest ass in the world Patrick. Although, it does make me happy, because then she'll tell him no when he offers her a spot, and Delaney will come to her senses, and they'll hook up =]

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Way to be an ass Burish, even if you weren't as big of a douche as Kane in the last chapter. Can't say that I'm mad that their date turned out horrible though =]

I love the Burish/Raylene thing they got going on now (even if it isn't that much)...keep it going, but don;t hurt Kane too much! =]

Um, that was a complete and Utter Rayish chapter.
I do not approve of Rayish.
I approve of Burney, Kandie/Rayick.
Capiche? :)

Wow I can't believe kane did that to raylene i cant wait go read the next chapter and to she how raylene will act around him. Please update soon
Great chapter <3

Pat's being an arse, make him stop? :)

Gotta love Adam. :)
and what the hell patrick Kane! I know he is drunk but the comments are gonna bit him in the ass later!!

burneyyyyyyyyy<3
yesss. <3
and, good for raylene.
just say no!
(especially to drunk pknes)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was a sad sad sad sad chapter

Patrick is horrible, making me not liking him, only a bit, good update. Can't wait for the next one.

Oh Pattycakes, what the eff are you doing?
[I don't even know how many times I've uttered those words in real life]
I was cracking up when he just kept saying, WHAT, to Adam & Delaney.
I'm thinking the fact that they were going out on a date messed him up and that's why he was so mean to Raylene.
Not that that's an excuse cause it isn't.
Boy needs to get his shit together.
More soon. <3

Oh my gosh! I really liked this chapter, but I couldn't believe what Pat said at the end! Even if he was trashed (from drinking by himself, oh PK, we'll work on that issue later...)
I'm glad that Delaney did agree to go out with Adam, though, and I can't wait to see how their date went. I really do hope that they end up together. And I'm interested to see how Raylene and Pat deal with what happened in the morning/when he's sober...
Great update! (:

I really really LOVED this chapter but ahhh poor Patty Cakes!!!! I feel so bad for him...but then agan he did get drunk and say mean things! AHH. Can't wait for the next..

Sorry I haven't commented In a while I've been really busy :/
Wow Delaney must be so confused right now, not knowing who to choose. I hope that her date with Adam will help her with her choice
I'm still rooting for Adam/Delaney and Raylene/Patrick.
Good chapter, it helped see what Delaney was going through a bit more
Lovely story , please update soon :3

BURNEY ME BABY!
:)
Please.

Oh gosh. Kaner seems like such a skeeze, but like, in an almost good way. LMFAO, that made no sense. But I was a little disappointed Kaner didn't talk to Raylene at all in this chapter. Next time, perhaps.

And, I'm still Burr/Delaney. Of course. I know what Delaney wants. She wants some Adam Burish peen. That's right. I SAID IT. Lmfao.

I am in a seriously derranged mood right now, and I apologize in advance if you end up reading this during track and make the coach hate you some more. LOL.

More soooooon =D

Well, I know what she wants - Team Kane!
Hopefully her date with Burish is one of those ones where nothing goes right =]

well at least adam finally has a date with her