It All Started at an Amusement Park - Comments

  • Always Less Than

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    Gurrraaateee update! Again!
    December 7th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • Always Less Than

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    Great update again!
    December 7th, 2009 at 12:20am
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

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    Fab update as usual :)

    I loved the bit when Frankie was trying to tell her What Joe says and Joe kept putting his hand over Frankie's mouth :) That was a lmao moment :D

    xx
    December 6th, 2009 at 10:00am
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    Great update!
    That rhymes!!!
    xD
    December 5th, 2009 at 05:09am
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    Oh well that was just a lotta bit cute :)

    Can't wait for updates xxx
    December 4th, 2009 at 08:44am
  • Always Less Than

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    Thanks for the dedication!
    You rock!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 03:25am
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

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    OH DUDE THANK YOU!!!

    I feel so loved!!!!!!!!

    I loved the bit about "It better be one hell of a date", "Oh don't worry it will be."

    That was really cool lol xx
    December 2nd, 2009 at 08:21am
  • Always Less Than

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    Ooooh! I like this!
    I subscribed(:
    December 2nd, 2009 at 03:39am
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

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    Ok, so I'm the first comment? Awesome lol :)

    I really like this story, I reckon it's going to be awesome. I'm subscribed and can't wait to read future updates.

    Favourite bit? =

    So, what are you doing later?" He asked, trying to flirt. I just gave him a blank look.
    "Not you," I said, as the coaster car finally stopped.
    He looked at me and smiled while the other guys he was with started cracking up.
    After they were finally sitting and waiting for the ride to start, the guy next to Joe that kind of looked like him said, "Dude, you just got poned!"


    ONE WORD:

    ROFL ;) xx
    December 1st, 2009 at 09:44pm