It All Started at an Amusement Park - Comments

  • Beautiful.mess;

    Beautiful.mess; (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I love this one too! Update soon! :DDD
    December 11th, 2009 at 12:14am
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

    xxxluckyluckyxxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    I love it.

    As usual :)

    xx
    December 10th, 2009 at 08:25am
  • lozoexx

    lozoexx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    HEYYY

    found your story today and have read all your updates so far

    figured you dont like silent readers so heres a lovely comment for you
    the story's amazing - keep up the fantastical work
    xx
    December 10th, 2009 at 05:56am
  • billie_Z

    billie_Z (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Australia
    i wonder if Joe actually gets nervous in real life lol
    i love it when he's nervous its cute
    woooo cant wait for next chapter hehe =]
    December 10th, 2009 at 03:59am
  • jesstierney

    jesstierney (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Joe's weird.

    The end.

    Kidding, kidding..that's not the end.
    I like how you make Joe nervous and stuff at the end, because I always picture him as cocky. It's nice.
    What's going tooo happpen??? :)

    Oh, dude. I'm trying to get tickets for the LA show on saturday. He added three more dates I think, so I'm hoping that gives me some kind of advantage. I'm nervous though. I really really wan't to go.
    December 10th, 2009 at 02:32am
  • bemypeterpan

    bemypeterpan (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    keep updating. i seriously love this fanfic. LOVE THIS. :)
    December 10th, 2009 at 01:54am
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

    xxxluckyluckyxxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Ok, so...

    NOW I'M JEALOUS OF HER!!!!!! (Not on account of the fact that her parents died when she was little, but SHE FREAKING KISSED JOE JONAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

    If you couldn't tell, this was my favourite bit, cuz it's just SO cute :) =

    When I looked up at him, he placed his lips gently onto mine.
    All in that one kiss, we created fireworks of our own.
    December 9th, 2009 at 09:01am
  • Always Less Than

    Always Less Than (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Beautiful chapter(:
    December 9th, 2009 at 03:25am
  • jesstierney

    jesstierney (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    I would die to sit between Joe Jonas' legs.
    That would be heaven :).
    The bit about her parents made me want to cry; I can't even imagine.
    I LOVE fireworks too, they make me appreciate life.
    Ahhhh KISSING! Yayaya.
    Can't wait to see what's going to happen next :)
    December 9th, 2009 at 02:20am
  • billie_Z

    billie_Z (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Australia
    awwww how lucky she got to sit between Joes legs :P
    lol its awesome:)
    December 9th, 2009 at 02:13am
  • bemypeterpan

    bemypeterpan (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    this is one of the cutest fanfics i've been reading right now. keep it up, pleeeeease:)

    btw; the fireworks kiss? PRICELESS. <3 :)
    December 9th, 2009 at 02:12am
  • billie_Z

    billie_Z (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Australia
    haha she gave Frankie a kiss not Joe
    that is hilarious i love this story
    and thanks for the dedications you're awesome =)
    December 8th, 2009 at 04:06am
  • cutiedwarf

    cutiedwarf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    ahahaha. joe's shock about not getting the kiss. LMAO
    December 8th, 2009 at 01:35am
  • Always Less Than

    Always Less Than (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Dude, that was such an awesome update... Sss?
    Thanks for all the dedications also! I freakin' love you!
    December 8th, 2009 at 01:09am
  • jesstierney

    jesstierney (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Love this story.
    Love Joe, god he is so funny.
    I just love the Jonas family, they rock.
    Frankie is adorable.
    I liked the bit when she asked nick if he really made miley get highlights!!! So funny.
    So I will now be commenting every chapter after this, but I just wanted to read all of it and then comment at the end. So I hope that's okay.

    Question: What state are they in?
    December 8th, 2009 at 12:21am
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

    xxxluckyluckyxxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Oooh!! I almost forgot.

    Thank you for all of the lovely dedications :)

    They make me smile. *Gives virtual cyber cookies* XD xx
    December 7th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

    xxxluckyluckyxxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    He was still in shock. :)

    Lol at her kissing Frankie (on the cheek) instead of Joe :D

    Loved it as usual xx
    December 7th, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • xxxluckyluckyxxx

    xxxluckyluckyxxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Hee Hee :D

    Joe + boxers + happy dancing + singing Too Cool = LOL

    Ooh ooh! and I love the bit where he (Joe) goes

    "No, no, he means before you went on a fifth date with him,"

    This was an awesome update lol

    And you got 2 new commenters, so *happy dancing* :) xx
    December 7th, 2009 at 07:57am
  • billie_Z

    billie_Z (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Australia
    love the story
    its awesome=]
    December 7th, 2009 at 07:27am
  • cutiedwarf

    cutiedwarf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    i will be a silent reader no more! i love it
    December 7th, 2009 at 05:38am