Beautiful Deception - Comments

awe no nick cant break up with her...great update

If Brian rapes her I'm going to come to him and give him a piece of my mind.....and my fist.
More pretty please! I'll give you a cyber piece of the cake I just made.

=] I have a feeling Brian is gonna get killed by Jack soon.

Brian sure ruined that intimate moment between her and Nick..i wonder whats he goes to her now? Great update

please, please, please, update soon!

Love it Love it Love it Love it LOVE IT!
Its a brilliant story!

brian creeps me out..i keep waiting for her to rape her or something..i really hope he doesnt that would be just horribleee.

but anyways im glad nick showed her what sex really is so she doesnt have to be terrified of it forever

Okay, UDATION PLEASE :)

Update soon pretty please. :) I thought it was to soon for her to have sex, I mean, she was just raped.

This is great I can't wait for more:)

LMBO. I can't wait to read more, hope there's another chapter soon. This one is definitely amusing.

awwwwe sooo sweet!!! update soon?!? mwwwah <3

Awww Nick is so sweet, and to be honest I feel kinda sorry for Brian. I loved it =)
Can't wait for more

Awe...that really romantic what Nick did for her.
Cute chapter. :)

Yipee, thank you!

This was wonderful update. <3

i luv ur story please update again soon

its been a while but i never gave up on this story i still love it and cant wait for an update

AWESOMMMEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU NEED TO PUT JACK IN NOOOWWW! LET HIM DESTROY EVVEERRYYYTHINNNG!!
MUAHAHAHA XD

alright I am a freak for commenting AGAIN! UPDATE!