Beautiful Deception - Comments

update i love this story

I have NO clue what Nick is going to do CAN'T wait

Awesome! Don't stop there! What's in the bag?

what's he got planned???
hope ya update soon :)

I wonder what Nick is planning?

idk if i like brian or not,
i mean he's written perfectly just idk if hes the good or bad guy
i kinda like him though
i loved this and cant wait for more, thanks for sending me the forth chapter it was very nice of you
sorry about your fone too

wow....i love love love ur wrk. ur writing style is really great an ur story lines they r really well written. plz plz plz update soon, i cant wait! :)

whoa. Totally intense O.O

First of all I just started reading this series today and I am already caught up. The first one was absolutely AMAZING and some of the cliffhangers were pretty intense, even though the only thing I had to do was load the next page... even that was too slow :P.

Second,... I don't like Brian AT ALL. He seems like he is going to cause more hurt than good in both of their lives. I say they just steal some of his money and take a flight to somewhere else where they can start over from scratch together. It seems like with that large of a house, there should be money lieing around somewhere... grr!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Seriously keep up the good work. :D

i luv ur story its different from everyone elses and it keeps u on ur toes wanting 2 no what happens so pleeezzzzz updfate soooonnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Wow, Brian was a little harsh and judging her like that...i mean he doesn't really know what she went through.
great update and can't wait for the next one. :D

omg love it so far
but for some reason i cant read the forth chapter
stupid parental control block
but the first three chapters are amazing
i cant wait for more

omg dont take the beer! it taste like piss anyways...and wtf? Brian back the fuck off

she should just yell it at him the next time he talks. im sure he would shut up and feel so stupid for mocking her about not being a virgin when she was raped in front of nick

love love love the story
you should updates it like....soon
hmm not sure sbout this brian dude...but i dont think i like him much.
maybe hes on jacks side!!
or maybe hes gonna hurt her too!!
dk but i have a feeling he shouldnt be trusted...
anyways cant wait for more (:
update a.s.a.p. please (;

Wow these stories are amazing! :D
Can't wait for another update; I'm so curious about what's going to happen. My mind's come up with about a thousand possibilities already. :P
And I'm really not sure about Brian...So far I don't like him much...

pleasee dont let him hurt her =[
if he does that would be really mean!
i want Brian to be a good guy

Ohh this is going to be interesting. :O
I can't wait for the next one.

I am going to resist the urge to type "omgomgomgomg, wtf is up with Brian?" and just simply say this: Bloody brilliant! Can't wait for another update.

love it so far
can't wait for more!!!!
i dont like brian lol he deserves to get slapped

UPDATE! I LOVE THIS!