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  • PerfectChemistry228

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    Comment Grrrrrrrrrrrr! Haha (.) <<<<the eyball is watching you!
    December 15th, 2009 at 09:12pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update.
    December 10th, 2009 at 11:33pm
  • PerfectChemistry228

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    Okay, thank god you made the sequal the day after I read the last chapter od deadly perception then I would have been "Fuck this, I'm goin to Beautiful Deception," thats how mch I LOVE these stories, although, I love both, seriously, you're creative and you kinda give a hint to Brian and I love how you give them simple names like NICK or JACK and BRIAN. They're easy to remember and ya! I LOVE YOUR CREATIVITY your my idol :)
    December 10th, 2009 at 03:12am
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    i think brian needs to hear what shes been through so he will back off...
    i love sex jokes..usually i make them but poor girl has definitely been through enough and i dont think she can ever take another sex joke again.
    December 9th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    Loved the update
    Brian will be an interesting factor in all this
    More soon!
    December 9th, 2009 at 12:04am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I'm so glad the sequel is finally here. :DD
    I'm still not sure about trusting this Brian guy but we will see.

    Amazing first chapter.
    December 3rd, 2009 at 07:17pm
  • a7x babe56

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    lovin this mclovin corry im a little weird but any way lol this story is freakin awesome
    Isubscribed to the first one and im going to do this one to
    please update soon
    December 3rd, 2009 at 03:01am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    loved the first chapter!
    So happy for the sequel.
    hmmm not sure what I think of the new guy yet.
    More soon!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 01:07am
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    i hope this brian guy isnt a rapist creeper in dissguise..she'll never trust again if he is.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 04:35am
  • Katrina ;

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    what? i can't believe that there are no comments for this story yet, but you probably just uploaded...anyways, i subscribed to ur first one and i subscribed here, i love this story and i hope u upload soon!!!!! xD
    December 2nd, 2009 at 12:45am