Thin - Comments

Amazing. As always.

Your writing isn't so complex that it's hard to understand or anything like that, but it's still incredibly well written.

The part about the scale...that's really sad. You portrayed her emotions perfectly. You have fantastic ability.
I have a feeling something big's going to happen next chapter...
Great job, anyways. Really great. You're incredible.
More when you can. (:

"You wondered how much Debbie would weigh before she died from starvation"

Ok, so i was almost crying @ that point! lol.
Seriously, just the thought of you going through that makes me quite depressed, really! LOL.

I hope your ok, though. XD.

And i'm oh, so bloody jealouse too. I wana write like you! lol.
This is what you call completly ridicuolouse - because it's so good! lol.
I don't know why though, there's just something about this story...

Keep up your writing, Debbie.
It's the only thing that keeps me sane! LOOLL

I Love You!
xoxoxoxoxox

hello!

gah, it's so original, I really love the way you've told it from the inside,
you've inspired me ( ;

-subscribes-

cool-nessssss

well... ur ARE gonna kill urself off, arentcha?
laptop.
^,^

OH MYFUCKING GODYAY!
YOU MADE ME A MODEL TOO!!
I WOULD HUG YOU, BUT MY CAPITAL LETTERS SHOULD SHOW MY HAPPY-HAPPY-JOY-JOY-NESS ENOUGH... that and i can't hug you cause of the whole trans-atlantic thing..... darn.
but anyway, thank you!!! ^.^
do you have any idea if Holly is still reading this? cause i havent heard from her.

but i agree w/ Where's Adalia,
"the ending...it's simply perfect.
Friend.
Who knew something so simple could be so powerful.
Amazing, of course."

: )

^ You're an awesome character, then. xD

Incredible update. I'll keep this comment short but the ending...it's simply perfect.
Friend.
Who knew something so simple could be so powerful.
Amazing, of course.
xoxo

*pokes commenter above*
i'm the Xanga girl..
lol
i got angry. YAY.

Awesome.
I feel really bad for the Xanga girl, and then for the main character as well.
And I am in love with your writing style.
Amazing job with this story, it's incredible.
More when you can.
xoxo

*raises hand*
New reader.
This story is awesome. Like... strangely awesome. Well written, no useless figures of speech, no useless adjectives, but the writing's as artistical as can be.
I'm furious at the English government... but yeah.
I'm subscribing!

OMg.
Not what i'd normally read but damn was that addictive.

Hurry up and add another chapter soon??
PLeease??

[:
xxoo

^.^

i wanna do the happy dance again...
stoopid sore leg muscles...
anyways,
YAY
i noticed you changed the title page to say Holly AND me is who you wrote it for.
i truely am honoured to be a part of this story.
heehee

Another update! ^_^
This is a great chapter.
Very well-written, as always.
This is really sad, though.
I still love it.
You're an incredible writer.
More when you can. [:
xoxo

I feel so sorry for her.
I wish she'd put on weight.

wow this is really good! you should keep updating=]]

OMFG I'M IN THE STORY AGAIN!!!
YAAAAY
thank you!!

*does happy dance*
but now i'm slightly confused.... where's the main character??
owwie my brain...

but still THANK YOU!!
*tackles*

Wow, I love this (:

interesting concept.
i enjoy being mentioned as a Xanga girl.
i made holly get a mibba. so you can thank ME.
buahaha
but really, awesome story. i'll subscribe.

Wow. The last line is really powerful.
You have an incredible story here.
I'm in love with it...really.
Amazing update.
More when you can.
xoxo

Edit- First post on second page, whoot!

Wow, this story is amazing.
It's so different from anything I've ever read.
This girl is so...human. But she lives in such a different world.
I really hate how she's not eating anything..it's worrying.
Great update.
More when you can.
xoxo

Wow, this is really good.
It's so different to everything else as well.
<3 Amazing.
More soon.
Blu xx