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Oh lord, this is awesome!

Every chapter is hot hot hot, but the chapter where Kris and Zack argue "HOW MANY FEET DO YOU HAVE?" I lost it! Hahahahaa.

I think they might be on an even keel now, what with the cinema and beach sex.

Will you be continuing with this? I'd love more

Unf, I forgot how great this story was.
Pleeeeeeeeeease more.

please continue this story. i love it..i wanna see who wins the bet... :p

I know it's been a while, but I'm loving this, and I think you guys should continue it.

Oh man I forgot to comment this. I am horrible!
BUT I LOVED THE UPDATE LYNDSEY!
Yes I did! It was amazingg! <333
Steammmmyyyyy :D

my dear lord, i don't know how i forgot about this but hot damn. i have officially slapped myself for doing so. the perfect balance of delicious smut and unbelievable laughs. i love it :)

imma take a long ass cold shower until this is updated lmao

Oh my!! Tee hee!!
I loved it ducky!!!

Oh and I'M BACK =D x

Ohh that was definitely very sexy and kinky! More soon, please?

Holy shit.....I've heard of 'sex on the beach' before, but mostly in a secluded area and at night or evening, but not in the morning with people not far away
But I really gotta say that that was pretty fucking awesome
So damn kinky.....it was probably one of my favourites so far, along with Kris' cinema one and your kitchen one
I really can't wait to see what's the next one's going to be like now.....
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

YEAY update !!!! thaaaaank u !!! loove is story <3<3<3

Public beach sex is so kinky, and I have to say that it's been one of the best so far!
;D

Hot damn woman! That was naughty!
... But extremely hot.
I adore this story. And I adored this update. :)

no more updates =[ ?

Oh my god! Freaking love this story, ladies! Seriously cannot wait for more! :)

So...this is probably the hottest story I've ever read in my entire life. And it's well-written, which makes it even better. I just read all six chapters in one go and I'm sufficiently...satisfied, haha. Chapter Six was absolutely hilarious; I don't remember the last time I laughed so hard. I'm officially addicted to this story. :)

Oh wow. This chapter really made me laugh. My favourite part of the story so far, was in this chapter when Zacky was all like 'HOW MANY FEET DO YOU HAVE?', that bit made me crack up.

Oh wow, that fight was so freaking intense!
I couldn't stop laughing at how no matter what Zacky would say, he just couldn't win.
Yet, I have to pity Kris cause I unfortunately get to experience the crucial pain.
Totally unexpected for a chapter, but I loved it!

I've never felt more sorry for Zach than I do now. It's unfortunate that he has to suffer through such insanity, and I totally agree with him on Johnny's suggestion being totally disgusting.

Zacky is the most loveable idiot I feel =D
I do feel a little bad for him, yet at the same time...no means no dude!! Tee hee.
You would think he would have learnt by now, but he is only a man...can't do too much thinking now can they??

Anywho, I LOVED IT!! Mhm, yes I did!!! And I quite like the fact that I didn't feel like a total dirty perve reading this chapter = ) Can't wait for more!! GO LYNDSEY GO!! =D x

Wow that was hysterical!! I loved it. Their fight was really funny even though I felt bad for zacky<3333