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  • the-quiet-one

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    Oh Zacky, it's not really smart pissing your girlfriend off when she's having her period
    But the fight was really intenese, even though it made no real sense
    And i completely understand where she's coming from, it really seems that all he wants is sex
    And then later on in his conversation with JC, he called her a hoe. That's the lowest of the low, just because she gets her period?
    But Lynds and Brian seriously need to step up with the kinkiness.
    My favourite part: At least I'd reached an epiphany of sorts. Now I just had to kiss ass. For a whole week. Fuck my life.
    Haha xD He sure as learned quickly after years what he has to do for his girlfriend
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    July 17th, 2010 at 01:58pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    Lmfaooo I laughed through that whole entire chapter. That fight made no sense but it was hilarious as fuck xD zacky - HOW MANY FEET DO YOU HAVE!?
    ME-*bursts into hysterical laughter*
    July 17th, 2010 at 09:47am
  • Call The Angels

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    I loved the update my love. It made me giggle. :)
    July 17th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    Ahahaha absolutely loved it.
    July 17th, 2010 at 07:29am
  • gipsy danger.

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    BAHAH!! The conversation with Johnny and Zacky cracked me up!
    And oh the fight! It was intense!! I loved it! It definitely made me want to go on a junk-food binge!
    I love how Zacky can go from fighting andf defending myself to "You can blow me now"
    Definitely one of my favorite parts for sure!
    I just love this story! haha
    July 17th, 2010 at 07:11am
  • gipsy danger.

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    Woo I loved the update!! <3
    July 5th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • BlackAshes

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    ahhahhaha lyndsey. leave it to you to make me feel like a complete and utter perv.
    i loved the update babe! more more more!
    <3333333
    June 20th, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • HeartFailure

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    Yup...the more I read this story...the more I feel like a pervert!! But I believe I'm okay with that ; ) Tee hee!!
    Loved it!! Can't wait for more!! x
    June 20th, 2010 at 11:33am
  • kalisweetblood

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    holy hell that was hott
    June 19th, 2010 at 09:54pm
  • jesus christ.

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    this story is the shit. i love smut. Naughty
    but, one thing: When he reached my hips, he bit the deathbat tattoo on my right hipbone and dragged his lips along my skin to do the same to the identical one on the left before he started making his way back up my body, gripping my thighs in his hands and roughly dragging them wider apart and pushing his hips in between and against me, the abrasive material of his jeans rubbing against the sensitive skin on the insides of my thighs, pulling a cry from deep within my throat and I couldn't help but push myself up and into him, grinding our hips together.
    this is the single longest fuckin' sentence i've ever read in my entire life. O_o
    June 19th, 2010 at 04:27am
  • burning bright.

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    This story will always and forever be absolutely fucking hot. It's just undeniably sexy, and I love every single chapter.
    June 19th, 2010 at 12:55am
  • aye chica !

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    All I can say is...wow.
    This story is amazingly written, it's crazy!
    I have not read a sotry where the sex is all...up in one's face. I literally had a spasm when I noticed the new update. I was just dying to read it.
    But this story....oh my god, just keep updating please!
    June 18th, 2010 at 10:29pm
  • Jon Toews

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    loveeee<3 i get all giddy when y'all update!

    im not even remotely from the south, so i dont know why i said y'all.

    but i loved thisss!
    June 18th, 2010 at 10:22pm
  • Razberry13

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    YEAY ! update ! thankies !!
    June 18th, 2010 at 09:10pm
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    holy hell. I needddddddddddddd a cigarette now
    June 18th, 2010 at 07:18pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Ohh holy shit.....
    Seriously that update was so awesome
    Haha, and there you can see, dear Brian, that you don't have much self control ;)
    Finally Lyn has holiday, which may give them some kind of advantage
    Hm, they don't have to go to Mexico, but..........it's their choice
    Can't wait to see what Zacky and Kris will be up too ;)
    I'm really looking forward to the next
    Hope you update soon :)
    June 18th, 2010 at 06:34pm
  • Razberry13

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    i looove this storry !!
    no updates ="[ ?
    June 3rd, 2010 at 11:28am
  • pyromaniac123

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    brilliant as always love,
    thanks for the update!
    enjoy your trip
    May 3rd, 2010 at 04:30am
  • burning bright.

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    That was so fucking hot.
    Every single chapter of this story is always orgasmic.
    I love it so much.
    ;D
    May 2nd, 2010 at 01:34am
  • Snoopy

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    That was so fraking good Kris!! Honestly so good. It was written fabosly :D
    Ahh canny believe they did it in the cinema, that is pushing the boat out perhaps TOO far haha... they must win this competition.
    I know how you feel with missing out on the movie world, i havent seen any of those three films either yet! ANd my updates! WOAH totally behind....

    this was epic. I lvoe it. I love you. Both of you :)
    May 1st, 2010 at 07:10pm