Friction - Comments

oh snap that was some hot shitt! i loved it. i would never go into that movie theater though, but that was definitely adventurous! loveddd it; zackary james is a beasttt<3

And forgot to say you made one tiny mistake
"...no one up there anyway, and whoa, okay..." -> you somehow have to decide if you want italics or underline xD

Did it somehow get hot in here? *fans self*
That was so incredibly sexy and kinky.
Poor Zacky getting turned on at first and then being denied. I understand that he was a grumpy ass, but holy shit 'making up' in the cinema. Naugty, naughty. ;)
Haha I wonder how Lyndsey will keep up with something like having sex in a cinema.
But the girls have to be a bit more careful because Zacky nearly caught on, although I don't think Zacky and Brian wouldn't mind. I bet they would support the girls with their bet......
I love the combimnation in this story of sexiness and humor. How you two combine it is awesome
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon:)

God, that chapter was amazing! I actually screamed a little when i got the update notification lol, which clearly makes me a perv. Again, i seriously can't wait for the next chapters. I really love the ineractions between the characters; it makes it all so real. Have fun on holiday!

I always feel a little bit of a pervert after reading this lol.
Loved the update ducky!!

Have fun on your holiday = ) x

holy shit. I dont smoke anymore but after reading those last two chapters I feel that I need a cigarette -fans self down- You just cant do that to a girl. Synyster and Vengeance sex!? You trying to kill me? lmao.
Great story.

Good lord....the kinkiness....the sex...fucking amazing!
I love how this story is hilarious...yet so sexy!
God, I don't even know what to say!
And Ichy....awwww, the poor baby! Must be scarred for life now!

Oh mann! I loved the update! Absolutely loved it!
Theater sex! Scandalous!
This story is just so great! :)

omg sex sex in the movies how adventurous what the hell took so long?

I'm pretty sure you two know that I love, love, love this story. But I wanted to tell you why.

TMI moment: I have to read the updates while I'm alone or the twitching will make someone think I'm having a fit. It would be an effort but I think I could keep a straight face while explaining it to the ER doctors.

If there's one thing I really appreciate, its quality smut. Anyone can write about the mechanics of sex but it takes something special to make it stand out. Love or hate, there needs to be some kind of emotion involved. I think that's what a lot of people lack. To me, its just boring if there isn't some kind of connection. No matter how hard we try sometimes, you can't remain completely removed from the person you're with. Sex is about letting your guard down and losing control. At least if you're doing it right lol.

The love between the couples really stands out and that works for the sex. They want and desire each other and that's what really brings it to the next level. Aside from the fact that you are both massively talented at writing the parts.

Its not just the sex though. I really enjoy the interaction between Kris and Lyndsey. You play off of each other so well that the banter is very believable and funny. I can believe that the two of them would actually make a bet like that.

What it comes down to is that this is one of my all time favorite stories so far. Hands down. I don't read many on this site because, and not to sound mean or anything, most just aren't worth the time or effort. I can honestly say I'll be doing an impatient little dance waiting for updates. It'll look a little like the I've-got-to-pee dance but with more whining and moving around...

O.o Is all that comes to mind.. lol.

this is incredibly hot. [;
I think that you should update like, right now just so that I can get my full share of smut.
you two are great writers, fersure.

Ohh hot damn that was fantastic
Ahhh sunburn sucks
Hehe Brian just had to go down into the kitchen just dressed in a towel and then when Brian suggested "right here, right now" i was like ohhhhhhh
My back began to hurt with her when her back with the sunburn hit the frigde and then when he tried to pull out but she was having nothing of it and pushed him to floor with her on top was amazing, the scene became way better because some humor was involved and it made the scene more
believeable :D
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Awww, I really liked that chapter. It was actually really sweet, haha! (: can't wait for mooooooooore! <3

haha that was fabulous, i loved every second.

I'm madly in love with this story.
It's ingenious, and I can't wait for more.

awsome story!
love it!

;)

Well...hot damn. Tee hee.
Loved it ducky = ) I feel a little bit like a big perv when I read this story...but I think I'm okay with that!! <3

Loved it! I practically cheered when i got the update notification :). I love how you managed to incorporate some humour into the sex scene; it showed how comfortable they were with each other and made the whole scene more believable. I'm seriously buzzed for the next chapter. Great writing, yet again! =D