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  • Lady.V.

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    Please, update - I'm begging you here.
    March 18th, 2014 at 03:22pm
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    Interesting update after some time. Liked it
    October 25th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • wish on a firefly

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    Sorry about the late comment, things have been a bit busy lately. Actually I can't remember if I even commented on this but I do remember you entered this into my contest and for that I thank you.

    I really like how descriptive your story was but it's kind of hard to tell when you're switching scenes or when this takes place because you switch from talking about the narrator being bed with Jasmine and then to talking about the narrator and the boy and back again. It gets kind of confusing to keep track of it all.
    March 14th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • understand

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    YESNOMOREELLE.
    i hope it was nothing like Elle's in a good way
    October 6th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • Caitlynnnn

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
    October 6th, 2011 at 01:32am
  • Jericho.

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    Don't end!!
    October 5th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • Mananiiu

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    Update soon please (:
    October 5th, 2011 at 07:42pm
  • ThEcRa-ZcHicK

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    You updated! Yay!! And they kissed, a REAL kiss! I love your story so much!
    October 5th, 2011 at 04:15pm
  • ThEcRa-ZcHicK

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    I MISS THIS STORY! *sniffs* How long is it going to be on hold?? You're making me sad :'( (<<< see?)
    Please update, I beg of you!!!
    September 27th, 2011 at 04:06am
  • Writing is my Life

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    Nice. I like it! keep up the good work Dragonxfox! :)
    May 2nd, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    So, I just read this whole fucking story. And I'm tired and hungry and need to go to sleep.
    I like it though.
    So you need to update soon. And yeah.
    I'm gonna go sleep now....
    ZzZzZzZ...
    xox
    April 25th, 2011 at 08:26am
  • polka dot perfection

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    PAGE CLAIM
    April 25th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • polka dot perfection

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    more!more!
    this is amazing:D
    April 25th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • VetteLover

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    Awesome!!! You fixed it! Yay! :D
    April 25th, 2011 at 04:53am
  • understand

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    “Fan-fucking-tastic you twat.”
    i laughed quite a bit at this

    he's had his eureka moment
    April 25th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • understand

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    i'm just wondering if there's a reason why half of the chapter is almost invisible
    April 25th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • VetteLover

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    Okays..... Don't know if it's just me or what but..... I only got half of the update......which bums me the hell out. ): I really want to know what goes on and now I have to wait. Gah!

    Anyways....great so far. Love the way it's written. Definitely a different style.
    April 25th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • Writing is my Life

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    I love it!!! YOu should continue it! Its soo good!!
    April 24th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • Writing is my Life

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    Wow, after what he said to her, he might lose her now, oooooooohhhh sammmyyy's gonna get it! lol
    April 23rd, 2011 at 04:58am
  • understand

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    o.o
    chapters are gone?
    oh goodness now i'm not sure what has happened or what was in those chapters
    April 16th, 2011 at 02:17pm
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