i LOVE this! i do think that some parts are a little bit confusing because it's so rushed. it seems that she just jumped from hating him to loving him. there needs to be more of the transition in between. other than that, it's a very good story! it's so different from a lot of the stories i've read feat. BMTH. keep writing, just work on your pace a little bit.
Oh, I really love this fanfic. it was hard to imagine how you'd get oli from this psychopatic killer into a soft and more comfortable man, but you just managd it :) great. cant wait for the next update & bmth next album!
i just read the whole story and i am absolutley in love with it!!!! please post more soon!? and i saw Bmth at Warped too, it was the best show i've ever seen :)