Fear Me Dear, for I Am Death - Comments

I love this! It's different :3

yay! i love this story! amazing update!
update soon :D

please please please dont get rid of this...
i would cry. legitimenntlly .
i really love this story. <3
thankx for writing it

please don't delete it
i'd rather read this in oliver sykes form than a7x form to be honest
i loveeeeee this storyyyyy <3

oops, clicked the button twice, stupid laptop of failure.

HI OMG I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY.
Heh, no, just kidding with the caps lock here. But I like it, it's so original. Kind of creepy in a way, but it's awesome : D

HI OMG I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY.
Heh, no, just kidding with the caps lock here. But I like it, it's so original. Kind of creepy in a way, but it's awesome : D

Updateee!(:
This is the best fanfic I've ever read.
Ahah, I love Oli Sykes<3

Thankyou for the tips XhellxxheartlessX I've sent Jinx a message talking about this so yeah. I guess I could get rid of it if its a problem. I don't mind. It's not that much of a big deal to me. Just something I do when I'm bored and have free time.

First, look into reviewing your story before posting it, and rereading through it to look for grammatical errors, because you make a lot of them. At least in what I could get through. Or if that's to boring for you, which lets be honest, it might just be, find an editor. Secondly, as for the misunderstanding, you really aren't paying attention to how the author feels about you ripping off her original idea. Even if you didn't, you aren't seeing things from her perspective. However, in my opinion, all you did was make a little bit of changes, however, the plot is strikingly similar to One Hell Of A Price.

As for it being unnecessary, I think that the author did what she felt she had to do in order for you to hear her. I honestly believe that you would have ignored the message and you wouldn't have discussed it any further. But by doing it this way, it caught your attention.

As for stories being similar, I completely agree. In the stories that I write, there are many similarities to Fix, as well as other stories. And I can find a lot of similar ideas in other stories on here as well, but they aren't exactly the same. The plot of Fix is exactly like this, except it's about Avenged Sevenfold, and there are other minor differences. Other then that, you just tweaked whole scenes of Fix, however I applaud you on your way of not just copying and pasting.

And the sending of a private message, well, that's just not how we do things. Thank you.

Thank you I Like To Color. And she's right. It's all just a misunderstanding. If you wanted to say something this wasn't necessary to do. You could've sent me a private message. Thank you.

^^^To three people above me:I'd just like to say that if you have a problem with this story you should have sent the author a message instead of being bitchy about it, there are like a jillion stories on this website and some are bound to be similar. All anoyone wants to do on here is read and write and I have a feeling all of this is just a big misunderstanding. I know this has nothing to do with me, but I like this story and I'd hate to see it deleted because of a mistake.

Anyway loved the update, hope you get through the writer's block:)

If you're going to rip off someone else's story, at least be a semi decent writer.
If I were you, I would delete this....before you embarrass yourself even more.

I'm not trying to be rude, but this is pretty much exactly like my friend's story except not about A7X and less well written.

Big fan of One Hell Of A Price To Get Your Fix?

umm, i have a small idea. it's not the greatest but, yeah. um, well the important thing could be something like there are cops outside, and they want to know if they had seen her, and the cops come in the house and oli or someone has to hide her. idk. but yeah. haha. um, i do really like this story though. (:

So I don't really have any ideas to help you, and I'm sorry =[
but if I come up with something I'll tell you =]
I do love this story so much, like my favorite oli story
its just so different and amazing
and For stevie wonder's eyes only is one of my favorite songs =P
Good luck with comeing up with ideas!!!!

This is most definitely my favorite Oli Sykes story!
Keep making it exciting :))

I love it!
It's sick and twisted, but that's what makes it so good.
It's something out of the ordinary.
But in a good way.
Definitely continue. :)

please updateee! this is my fav oli story :)))