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  • Louise Marie

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    Good job! You are a good writer, just so you know.
    April 17th, 2010 at 06:40am
  • And_Lucy_Loves_Me

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    i feel like shit! this story was 'inactive' or something so it never sends me updates. and now is over.... but i can go and read the sequal. this was my first sid story and it is still my fav. u should be very proud of it.
    April 5th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • MissLis

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    I'm glad that Sidney suggested for her to come with him to Pittsburgh. I think they need to strengthen that bond they formed and if she didn't come she'd lose her "attachment figure" again. Sidney's helped her come so far and she needs to stick with him, if she ever wants to get to the bottom of it all :)
    April 4th, 2010 at 06:26pm
  • Blues_Jukkes

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    loved the ending!
    Sequel please :)
    April 3rd, 2010 at 06:06am
  • Isildur'sHeir

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    oooooh! i hope im one of the 15 comments! =)
    and i need you to update soon!
    i cant wait for the sequel!
    April 3rd, 2010 at 04:08am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Ah that was such a good story. PLEASE update, I want to know what happens
    April 3rd, 2010 at 03:38am
  • Taylor;

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    It's good that Ella did choose to tell her grandparents, and that they're still supportive and loving of her since she does still need some kind of support system to help her heal from what she went through.
    Finally Sid steps out of his comfort zone and into a position of vulnerability by telling Ella that he loves her and, I think she's got the message that it's not just a friendly, I love you.
    I like that Sid steps up and tells Ella to come with him since she has become a fixture in his life and he doesn't want her to be gone even when he's back in Pittsburgh.
    Can't wait for the sequel. Loved the ending finally all the loose ends tied up.
    April 3rd, 2010 at 03:07am
  • Yakitori

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    I like how everything was resolved in the end, particularly how Ella was able to tell her grandparents. I can't wait for the sequel!
    April 3rd, 2010 at 02:03am
  • cathy d

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    So glad that she found Sid!! Great ending for a great story! Thanks for writing it for us to enjoy!!
    April 3rd, 2010 at 12:24am
  • blah92094

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    Wow, the ending was really good :) I'm really excited for the sequel, hope you put it on soon!!
    April 2nd, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • do you feel?

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    oh my goshhhh! I'm so glad she said yes, I totally would have haha.
    I reallllly hope you put the sequal up! I loved every bit of this! :D
    I cannnnottttt waiit!!
    :D:D
    April 2nd, 2010 at 10:36pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    That was the best ending that I could have possibly imagined for this story. :) I'm so excited for the sequel now!!!!!!!! I loved it, and I am definately going to be loving the sequel, I can already tell. :)

    Love it, love it, love it, and I can't wait!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    April 2nd, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • do you feel?

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    aww, Sid is such a doll! i love it :)
    March 31st, 2010 at 03:31am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!! Sid!!!!!!!!!! tell her when she's awake!!!!!!!! Adorable, and I love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 29th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • Louise Marie

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    I love the story. It's amazing how you came up with such a beautiful love story. Please keep updating.
    And keep writing some more stories. Who know's someday soon you will be the next JK Rowling of love stories.
    March 29th, 2010 at 03:03am
  • Isildur'sHeir

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    aaw, the sequel better be out soon after the last chapter! =)
    i love this chapter.
    more soon! =)
    March 28th, 2010 at 03:03pm
  • SoccerHockeyChick.

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    Awww! Sidney is in loveeee!! :D
    loved it as always! Update soon!!
    March 28th, 2010 at 06:51am
  • awakeandunafraid!

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    Just started reading this. I love it! Keep on truckin'.
    March 28th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • Taylor;

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    Liked the brother-sister moment between Sid and Taylor he does seem like he'd freak out about his little sister trying to give him advice on his relationship status with Ella. "Let's play some hockey," nice way to change the subject.
    Glad that Sid and Ella are talking and hanging out with each other again since Summer is coming closer to an end. I respect that Sidney didn't tell Ella's grandparents what had her so torn up since, that's something Ella should do, if she chooses to.
    Too bad Sid told Ella he loved her again when she was near asleep on him.
    Love how the story flows together, almost makes me think it could be one of those Lifetime original movies. That's good, this is my way of saying, it transitions well and seems realistic.
    March 28th, 2010 at 04:05am
  • Yakitori

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    I sure hope that people start commenting, your too amazing a writer to stop writing because people don't feel the need to give feedback. I hope you update soon.
    March 27th, 2010 at 09:34pm