OMG! i am soooo sorry i haven't commented in forever. my stupid parents grounded me. )= anyways, i really loved it!! that's sad that her dad died ): please update soon! :D
Very nice and touching story. Some words are misspelled, guess you are in a hurry to publish it. Overall, I love the storyline and the progression of the relationship of Sid and Ella. Keep up the good work. I love to see the story come to life in a screen.
When you talked about this story in your message, I decided to check it out. And I'm so glad I did. :) And now I also understand what you were saying when you were talking to me about my story I'm working on. :)
I have fallen in love with this story, and I think that it's ridiculous that there's only three pages of comments on it. :) I love it so much, and I can't wait until you update it again, along with your other stories ;)
okay, i feel bad for Sidney... i mean, not to get loved back the way he wanted? that hurts. and second, keep writing because im looking forward for more! keep up the great work! :D
Dahhh... Sidney was even adorable with Ella in his toddler years. Just means that he was always a sweetie pie to Ella. I almost feel bad for Sid, it seems like he's not good when it comes to girls crying, specifically, Ella. But, I think that if Ella felt that way about her father visiting the grave should have given her a sense of some sort of closure yeah her father is physically gone from her life but, she still has her memories. I think that Sid should try to explain to Ella his feelings aren't purely platonic needs to stop walking on eggs shells completely and show her he cares (I'm not suggesting he throws her down for a good romp, probably not a good move with her history but, holding hands hmm, something to show that he likes her more than a friend). Poor Sid getting shot down without Ella even intentionally doing so. Have I mentioned that I love you and this story? No? Well, I do.
T___T Ella broken down in front of her father's grave and Sid just watching just broke my heart. Your story is so scenic. It flows like a movie in my head. I think Sid's a pushover. He took that rejection like a man though. It made me laugh a bit inside. Ella just shot him down and she never even knew about it. I'm reading all your stories, and by far, this truly is my favourite. Keep it up and update soon ^^
You know what would have made this chapter just all the more better? If Sid or Noah had accidentally hit Megan with the tennis ball. I get that she was once a nice girl but, if she became this horribly mean chick after using Sid then I have no sympathy for her. She needs to stop living in the past and realize that things have changed and Sid isn't interested in her anymore.
Jessica is very insightful and clearly is the character that'll attempt to push Sid and Ella together. Sid and Jessica seem to have more of a brother and sister type of relationship rather than neighborhood friends, I don't see her having romantic feelings for him though.
I would have liked to have known more about Ella finding out how her father passed away. I know that while she went in the house we were able to find out Sid's feeling but, we missed out on something that'd be very important to Ella's character development. Hopefully you'll elaborate on her father's passing so we can see how it truly effects Ella's character and her dynamics with Sid.
P.S. I'll punch you in the ovaries if you stop updating. Love you bunches though.