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  • girlygurl2614

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    So I may or may not be Ddicted to your stories. Keep it up! I love it!
    March 27th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • cathy d

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    I love the end when he told her he loved her! Great update, can't wait for more!
    March 27th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • letssailintothesea.

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    I love this soooo much. It's really emotinal and it just tugs at your heart. You're an amazing writer, keep updating please. :)
    March 27th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • putitinmy5hole

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    Post post post :P
    love this!
    March 27th, 2010 at 10:01am
  • headintheclouds

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    good story. its different from those on here. keep up the good work!
    March 27th, 2010 at 07:57am
  • SoccerHockeyChick.

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    OMG! i am soooo sorry i haven't commented in forever. my stupid parents grounded me. )=
    anyways, i really loved it!! that's sad that her dad died ):
    please update soon! :D
    March 21st, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • Louise Marie

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    Very nice and touching story. Some words are misspelled, guess you are in a hurry to publish it. Overall, I love the storyline and the progression of the relationship of Sid and Ella. Keep up the good work. I love to see the story come to life in a screen.
    March 20th, 2010 at 10:22pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    When you talked about this story in your message, I decided to check it out. And I'm so glad I did. :) And now I also understand what you were saying when you were talking to me about my story I'm working on. :)

    I have fallen in love with this story, and I think that it's ridiculous that there's only three pages of comments on it. :) I love it so much, and I can't wait until you update it again, along with your other stories ;)

    :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 19th, 2010 at 12:55am
  • Isildur'sHeir

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    okay, i feel bad for Sidney... i mean, not to get loved back the way he wanted? that hurts. and second, keep writing because im looking forward for more! keep up the great work! :D
    March 17th, 2010 at 02:33pm
  • Yakitori

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    I love the tenderness of the story and the relationship dynamic between Sidney and Ella. I hope you update soon!
    March 17th, 2010 at 06:52am
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    Dahhh... Sidney was even adorable with Ella in his toddler years. Just means that he was always a sweetie pie to Ella.
    I almost feel bad for Sid, it seems like he's not good when it comes to girls crying, specifically, Ella. But, I think that if Ella felt that way about her father visiting the grave should have given her a sense of some sort of closure yeah her father is physically gone from her life but, she still has her memories.
    I think that Sid should try to explain to Ella his feelings aren't purely platonic needs to stop walking on eggs shells completely and show her he cares (I'm not suggesting he throws her down for a good romp, probably not a good move with her history but, holding hands hmm, something to show that he likes her more than a friend).
    Poor Sid getting shot down without Ella even intentionally doing so.
    Have I mentioned that I love you and this story? No? Well, I do.
    March 17th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • bumblebear

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    T___T Ella broken down in front of her father's grave and Sid just watching just broke my heart. Your story is so scenic. It flows like a movie in my head. I think Sid's a pushover. He took that rejection like a man though. It made me laugh a bit inside. Ella just shot him down and she never even knew about it. I'm reading all your stories, and by far, this truly is my favourite. Keep it up and update soon ^^
    March 17th, 2010 at 04:58am
  • putitinmy5hole

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    I <3 this, post moree soon!
    March 14th, 2010 at 11:02am
  • Isildur'sHeir

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    omgosh! i thought i commented but i didnt. well. so far. IM IN LOVE :) i love all your chapters! keep doing a great job :D
    March 13th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • Yakitori

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    Wow, you really know how to keep people interested and how to get them commenting! I hope you update soon!
    March 6th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • SoccerHockeyChick.

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    Oh snap! This is getting interesting!! :D
    update soon!
    March 6th, 2010 at 05:56am
  • Taylor;

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    You know what would have made this chapter just all the more better? If Sid or Noah had accidentally hit Megan with the tennis ball. I get that she was once a nice girl but, if she became this horribly mean chick after using Sid then I have no sympathy for her. She needs to stop living in the past and realize that things have changed and Sid isn't interested in her anymore.

    Jessica is very insightful and clearly is the character that'll attempt to push Sid and Ella together. Sid and Jessica seem to have more of a brother and sister type of relationship rather than neighborhood friends, I don't see her having romantic feelings for him though.

    I would have liked to have known more about Ella finding out how her father passed away. I know that while she went in the house we were able to find out Sid's feeling but, we missed out on something that'd be very important to Ella's character development. Hopefully you'll elaborate on her father's passing so we can see how it truly effects Ella's character and her dynamics with Sid.

    P.S. I'll punch you in the ovaries if you stop updating. Love you bunches though.
    March 6th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • dreamerforever

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    Aw..that's so sad. Thank goodness she has Sid.
    March 6th, 2010 at 03:02am
  • cathy d

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    Great update! I love Jessica's insight to Ella and Sid! Poor Ella has lost so much, hope Sid will be able to help her through it!
    March 6th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    I feel so bad for Ella, so much is happening to her. She's lucky though that she has Sid there for her. Great udate and I can't wait for the next =)
    March 6th, 2010 at 02:24am