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WHY?!?!?!?!?

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M o r e s o o n p l e a s e

you gotta fix it.

I finally got the guts to comment, finally!
Anyways, I love this story. I'm always checking all the time if you updated yet or not. When you updated chapter eighteen it got me so happy... until I saw the title I knew it was going to be sad. When I was reading the chapter I found myself gasping for air when I found out Adrian was the dog, the dog was my favorite person (or animal,) in the story. I love how you write and how you can make up great fantasy stories :)

Oh gosh. That was amazing.
I'd wondered what happened to Dog and what betrayal Aurora would need to go through but I guess I got my answer now. Sad how she chose to give all her memories up though... :(

OHMYGOD! I feel so bad for Aurora now. I can't wait to read more.

I CAHNN'TT BELIEEEVEE ITT!
Haha dude I must be stupid...I have to reread this whole story now because I had no clue Adrian was Dog

I loved this chapter though!

That was amazing
The entire story is brilliant!
I can't wait to read more
It really does have a lot of twists and turns, I like it though
It's unpredictable and completely original
I was beginning to wonder what had happened to Dog
I guess I got my answer
I even went back to read parts where Dog had appeared
Chapters 17 & 18 are my favorites
17 because they get together and 18 because they part

I think I just died a little.

ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod
I am so excited for the next chapter now. HOLY SHIT.

As always, beautifully written. And man, you sure have written alot in the last 40 days. Now that my media fast is over, I sure had a lot to catch up on, so here goes!

No, I am ashamed to admit that I did not figure out Aurora's origins till about half a chapter before she did. Which is a giant kutos to you. My family is always giving me funny looks becaus I'm growling at the TV or something because I already know what's going to happen... So annoying. Eh, the fact that my mom would wanna have a talk with me over the last few chapters(if she knew) is kinda a con for me, but everything else is so amazing it cancels it out. I'm thankful that you focused on the differences between Aurora and the nymphs and the other girls. As always, I cannot get over how amazing beautiful your voice is.... Syntax, figurative language, all the junk they teach you in English class fits together so well... It's not like reading. The words flow and caress each thought. Lately, I've been finding that my own voice is annoying me... Which is quite a predicament... Anyway, I want a copy of this on my bookshelf, once you get it published and all *wink wink*.

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

This didn't suck at all!
You wrote it favorite tastefully and classy. It was very sweet (:
Your writing is amazing, Emily.
I'm going to be so sad when this ends, ha.

WOW!! I love your stories! they are so magical, they seem to come from dreamland... especially Aurora.

It didn't suck. I love them.

Dude...

Okay, so I read all of the updates and oh my god, oh my god, oh my god. Or er, um, "gods." ;) I can't even explain how much I love your writing. I only wish I had half the amount of creativity you do. I mean, wow. Just wow. Those nymphs remind me of half the people on this planet, haha. And Adrian? He's so beautiful, in all ways, as is Aurora. Also, when they had sex, I sort of pictured the moon like, um... y'know, never mind...

And seriously, I'd say that if Aurora doesn't want to be the moon, I'd be more than happy to take her place, but I think I'd miss my parents too much... and a bunch of other people. Anyway! I don't know what to say. I can't put my thoughts into words when it comes to this story.

Wait, never mind, I've got something: Okay, when I become president I'm going to have the secret service take you from your home, alright? Topnotch scientists and engineers are going to scour your mind, then they'll scour your stories and then finally, they're going to turn Adrian (and Quinn, btw) into real, authentic people that can be sexed up like mofos... and talked to/with (of course of course).

Yeeep.

THIS IS THE BEST FUCKING THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE.
i love you for writing it, i really truly do.
i want to cry from happiness, but i am so freaking nervous to find out what happens next.
i know you have some sort of deception planned....

FINALLYY!!!!!

YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so happy i could die of happiness!!!
XD XD XD

Omg I may sound like a total pervert, but I loved that last chapter haha!
Aww they love each other... I'm such a sucker sometimes hahah :)

WHOA!!!
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BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!! *happy dance* ...
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AWWW.

And no it did not suck. Shut up dummy.

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!