Aurora - Comments

I love how your stories are always magical, but have this bit of realism, too. I can't wait to see how it turns out !

It gives me the chills :) Good job, Emily. I loved the last couple of parragraphs the best.

i'm in complete awe of this, i absolutely love it. it kind of gives me a dreamy, cold feeling but in a good way. does that make sense?

She stared at me for a long while before turning back and running through the woods, human. Now she, Dog said, You should fear.

That kind of gave me cold chills.

I absolutely love this even more than I did before. I feel sorry for Aurora in a way and I'm dying to know more about what Dog really is.

For some reason, it felt as if something was beginning. As if the gears of a large clock were starting to turn, as if they'd been winding up for some time now and finally they were being set to work as they must.

That part gave me the shivers like craaazyyyy. Seriously. This story is so epic.

iI is great so far. I look forward to the updates.

Loved it. Can't wait for more.

This is really legit :)
I can tell I'm going to obsess over it.

I loved this!!! I finshed reading Lament two nights ago and that whole story was truly amazing!!! I wasn't sure if you could top it....but you just might!!! I'm definately subscribing!!! Keep writing it!!!

That was beautiful!
I love how you described how they live and everything.
I could really picture it in my mind.
I cannot wait for more of this.
Fantastic job! :)

I LOVED THIS. So amazing!! I am dying for more now! :D

OH MY GOD.

This is so freaking awesome. Ahh!

I just know that this story's gonna be fantastic. GOOD JOB :D

THIS

IS

SO

COOL.

This story will be amazing, I'm sure of it =D Great update.

I am so so soo excited for this!! Please write it soon :)

I have a feeling this story will be amazing :D
Can't wait for it!

BY GOD YES =D It's gonna be amazing, I know it.

YEEEEEES I AM SO EXCITED. You don't know this but right now I am screaming. A lot.