Oh, Bella, you I read this thing about Twilight. It was about Bella, I forget who said it, but it was something like...
"I don't get thick Bella chick. Why can't she go out with the werewolf and vampire. I mean the werwolf can't go out and night and the vampire can't go out during the day, what are the odds they'll run into each other?"
I laughed so hard when I heard that. At least I think I quoted it right.
So about the story, much better about the capitalization, so two thumbs up for that! And despite my hate for Bella, I liked this chapter.
Jacob and his abs in the rain, oh what wonderful pictures in my mind. I really hope you update again really soon, cause I'm totally loving this story! Hopefully this long comment can inspire you, haha.
Aside from like the capitalization stuff...I found this story very enjoyable. It was super cute and had funny moments.
I really like that. =) And I hope you update very soon. Cause I wanna read more.
Like Sam Shadows said, there aren't many good Paul stories. But this one has lots of potential, so please, oh please update soon!!! Cause I'm ready for more. LOL
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously Amazing! There arn't many realgood Paul stories on this site. I love yours!! Consider me subscribed! Oh! I took your stories comment Virginity!!! Yeah!! Sorry, I'm weird :P