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Okay so I just read this for the first time and it is completely adorable no joke XD great job

I loved this story!
I wouldn't be opposed if you did a sequel in the future! :)

This story was so adorable!
You did a great job with it.
Maybe, hopefully, you'll be inspired to bring them back sometime in the near future.
Great job!

when i got the email, i got sooo excited that you finally updated! and then i read it. and then it was the end. and then i got really sad. i can't believe it's over! you did such a great job with this story, it was one of my favourites for sure! i'd love it if you wrote a sequel but i'd love it oh-so-much more if you wrote an entirely new luke story! or just a new, super romantic max story. whichever comes to you first! lol <333333333333

I would love if you wrote a sequel!

I loved the ending !
I have to admit I was a little worried at the beginning that it might be over between them. However I'm glad they worked it out.
Definitely game for a sequel :)

“What the fuck do you need to explain?!” he hisses, and yanks his hand so viciously out of my grip that not only do my nails leave thick, bloody gouges on both the bottom and top of his wrists, but I lose my balance and topple backwards into the wall behind me. “You said no!” he bellows, as he twirls around and advances on me as I scramble to my feet. “What else more is there to fucking say?!” - - OMG this is just so intense. You can just feel Luke's hurt and her scrambling to fix things.

The impact of Luke’s fist has not only left a deep, gaping crater in the dry wall, but as seemingly snapped him out of his rare moment of blind rage. This kind of violent outburst is so uncharacteristic and troubling that it’s even left him shaken; through the blinding tears that pour from my eyes and cascade down my face I can see the now ashen colour of his skin and the fear that’s etched on every inch of his face and evident in his eyes. - - wow - this so good. I know I said it before, but I'm not very creative today - very intense!

“Kay-Cee…” he chokes out, and drops to his knees in front of me. “…I didn’t mean it…I don’t know why I did it…I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to scare you…I didn’t…” - - OMG I feel worse for him than I do for her. I think he scared the crap out of himself.

“I love you, you incredibly stubborn, immature pain in my ass…” I growl. “…I love you more than anything or anyone else on this entire planet. But if you ever do anything like that again, I swear to God I’ll kick your ass so hard even your great grandchildren will be born dizzy, understand me?” - - Oh Thank God!

“Do you?” I inquire. “Believe in us?”
“With my whole heart,” he answers confidently. I had no doubt.

Liam Mitchell Alexander Schenn is a healthy ten pounds, eight ounces and an impossibly long twenty one inches - - Holy Crap.

“I think he’s all both of us,” my husband declares. “I think he’s a mix of everything that is amazing and good about both his mom and his dad.” - - It's just too adorable how Luke is with Kay-Cee and Liam. They just feel like this precious family.

Life couldn’t possibly be any more perfect. - - I'm so glad this ended so happy and perfect.

I love this chapter. I love how we got to see how they got here. How they said fuck you to all the haters and the doubters. It was really amazing.

I want to see the old sequel come back. Just saying. I loved that story.

just kinda curious, but do you not actually like mason raymond or was he just random? because i really love this story, but it breaks my heart everytime you write about him like that ):

I legit loved the ending! and I ended up teary-eyed just reading it :)
I'd have to agree with ending it, for now at least.
Definitely continue with your other stories ... They're just as amazing!

Nooooooo, it's over! :(
I'm so sad that it's over, but I couldn't agree more about ending it there.
I'm going to miss these two, or should I say three with the addition of baby Schenn.
And I'll count this as a late birthday present ;)
Think I'll be able to sucker a sequel out of you?
Loved it as always!

this legit brought me to tears! it was so beautiful! and so perfectly written. bravo :)

Aww it ended sweet! Seriously you need to do a sequel for it, with the return of evil MayRay! :P

Now you can continue with Em/Max and Bronwyn/Sid!

aw, that was such a cute ending, i loved it :)

I loved the story it was written so beautifully. Great job. :D

you make raymond sound so mean ? D: do you hate him or something? :(
<3 raymond in real life.

Just got all caught up on this story, & HOLY SMOKES! Why did she say no?! Ohh man, can't wait to see how this plays out!

ugh, i really think this is the best layout ever.

OMGOMGOMG i cannot believe she said no! how does anyone say no to Luke Friggen' Schenn let alone, say no to a proposal from him! i trust you though. knowing you, you're probably going somewhere freakin' brilliant with this.

i loved the update as alwayyyyyys! i think they're so damn precious together, especially when they talk about the baby.

it was so weird reading that luke was thinking of moving to barrie or pickering or markham or whatever, 'cause i know and have been to all those places! it's just strange. i just moved to a place close to richmond hill though. eugh.

i lovvvvved the update and i'm sooo happy you updated! can't wait for more! i want this damn muse to stick! <3333

what the hell! Kay-Cee! Come on! Why the hell not? ugh. she needs to get that stick out of her ass and say "Fuck Yeah Luke, i'll marry you." i mean they are living together and having a baby? why WOULDNT they get married? hmmm. PLEASE update soon!

WTF? Kay-Cee!!!! :O I understand they are young but come on... *sulks*

I’d live in a cardboard box behind the ACC as long as it meant I was with you,” I declare - - Awww Luke.

I crave sleep,” I repeat. “You keep me up all night! You and your raging hormones and your incredibly high expectations. I mean, I know I’m a total sex God and all that… - - Still at it. That's what I like to see!!!

This is by far the scariest thing I’ve ever done in my entire life; I’ve played on a national stage while in the World Juniors, I’ve nearly pissed myself from both excitement and nerves during the singing of O Canada before my first NHL game, I’ve gone toe to toe with some of the biggest and baddest guys in the league, I’ve sat through many Ron Wilson tirades and bit my tongue as he degraded me and made me feel like a worthless sack of shit. But nothing terrifies me more than the ring that sits in the palm of my hand. - - Oh I hope this means he's nervous about her answer and not because he doesn't know if he's doing the right thing

I’m ready for the next step; I’m ready to be a husband and a father. And no one is going to convince me otherwise. - - Guess that answers that. Yay LUKE!!!!

“Luke…oh my God…” she breathes, laying a hand over her mouth as tears sparkle in her eyes. “…it’s beautiful…so beautiful…” - - YAY!!! She's happy. You never know - so I was just a little nervous. Glad she's happy.

I want to be everything to you. I want to marry you. As soon as possible. Before the baby is born. I want you both to have my last name. - - Awww Luke!!!!

I’m sorry…” she whispers, as she shakes her head in dismay and presses a kiss to each of my knuckles. “I can’t.” - - WHAT????? What do you mean no? She can't say no. She just can't.

I know you want to update the other stuff, and you know how much I love Osh, but I need more. I need to know why she'd say no. WHY????

We're going to talk about this tonight. :D