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WHAT?! I know that you said that you'd give me drama and the whole shebang, but WHAT?! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!
Can I punch her please? Momma always said never hit a pregnant woman...but I think there's an exception to every rule.
Other than the heart attack at the end I loved it...and I"m very happy that Osh is next on your list :)

OHMYGAWD YOU DID NOT JUST WRITE THAT! :O My life is over. lmao but thank you for the update! It made my day better. :D Just fix that tiny problem of her not marrying him.

KAYCEE YOU DUMB GIRL
SAY YES
WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?!
THIS IS NO TIME TO BE INDEPENDENT!!!!
UGH! gosh. so much frustration. poor luke, he must be SO heartbroken!!!
update right away!! <33333 i LOVE this story!

difficult decision but I think she's right, it's not the right time for that...

mother of GOD, that chapter 7 was hot. *fans self* whoo, I need another shower. hot damn.

Really hot story I must say! :)

Listen bitch, he’s got skills. Mad skills. Get him between the sheets and he’ll rock your fucking world and have you seeing stars in less than sixty seconds. Not that it will ever happen; you’re a washed up hag and I’m young and beautiful and I give him endless amounts of wild, crazy and totally unhinged sex. So touch him one more time and you’ll be getting a face full of fist. - - OMG I would be so thinking this myself. So realistic!

“…he doesn’t need any balance or coordination when I get him into his favourite position.” - - Something tells me it’s natural talent – and maybe a different kind of coordination – just sayin’.

there’s something I really need to know. Something I’ve always been curious about when it comes to Luke. And let’s just say those shorts have got my imagination running rampant and…” - -Yeah we all wanted to know that and OMG those shorts.

Mason had never loved me and he probably would never love him and in the end he would have left me broken and alone and bitter and beyond all repair.
Luke saved me. In every way a person can be saved. - -So glad she sees this. Kay-Cee is a smart girl.

One day he’ll be my husband and -sooner than we ever expected- the father of my children - - well there it is :D

“You love me, Kay-Cee Hernandez!” he calls, as he walks backwards towards where Garnet and Trish are waiting for him to rejoin them. “You love me and you can’t live with out me!” - - awww Luke. She so does.

He may not be perfect in other peoples’ eyes, but he damn sure is in mine. - - Yeah – I think he’s perfect in a lot of people’s eyes actually – though maybe not Ron Wilson.

Wow! A BABY! Well she’s right, love can get them through that, and there is no doubt how much these two actually love each other, so why shouldn’t they have a baby.

This was such a brilliant way to bring that yoga video into this! Bravo - nicely done!

Liking the little jump ahead to the surprising news that Kay-Cee has a little maple bun in her oven. Not really surprising really, with the way these two can't keep their hands off of each other - ah young love. Does she leave Lucas with ANY energy to play hockey? Or is my first assessment correct in that all the, er exploration of each other just charges up his batteries and revs him on?

Can't wait to see what happens at the ol' homestead!!

I was so excited to see that this was updated! I loved it!

i had no idea what this story was when i got the notification, since the layout was changed. but then i realized and like flipped out! Im so excited you are back to updating it! I love it!
And i was not expecting them to have a baby! like woahh.
Haha and i also watched that video of their yoga experience; its quite hilarious and adorable <3
more pleaseee :)

Totally loved this!! Amazing job. I love these two. So I was happy to see them updated.
Fabulous work!!!! Can't wait for more. And tell the Luke muse no more vacations, lol.

wheep update!

and to be honest I've seen that video way too many times :D and watched it right again after reading this part haha just too good not to constantly watch!

wow, totally blindsided there by the pregnancy! whoops...
innocently (yeah, my ass! psh) reading this part and in the middle of it BAM...
well done :P

Ron Wilson is a royal jackass. Jus' sayin'.

“He has all the finesse of baby Bambi learning to stand for the first time,” I declare, as I watch -in sheer amusement. - dude, i was already laughing at that. what a good start to the chappa <3

His only saving grace is how fucking hot he is; his newly shorn hair glistening with perspiration and sticking up in several different directions, his cheeks flushed with both embarrassment and exertion, and his body on display in a sweat drenched underarmour shirt and a pair of shorts - uhh.. what a mental image.. i mean, really. wow. yeah. wow.

So touch him one more time and you’ll be getting a face full of fist. - Uh-oh, someone's pregnancy hormones are kicking innnnn! sneaky, sneaky sammie.

My form’s just fine…” he retorts, and I can’t help but beam with absolutely pride as he abandons his quest for yoga perfection. - I went 'awh' outloud. that was so cute. i love devoted boyfriends. they're the best kind to read about!

MASON RAYMOND IS A YUCKY JERKFACE. i hate him, i hate him, i hate him, i hate him, i hate him. since wayyyy before this story. hence why i'm sooo happy with your choice of 'villain'.

We’d found out just three short weeks ago that we’re expecting a middle of May baby; I’m currently eleven weeks pregnant. - Sooo, my jaw literally dropped at this. i was soooooooooooo not expecting it! i had to read it over just to make sure i wasn't missing anything and that i read it right! but then i got over my shock and got all happy. little baby lukas being a daddy... that's like.. strange... when babies have babies... like nikolai kulemin!

And huge, huge, HUGE hugs and kisses to BlackAshes for making me my phenomenal layouts. <3 you're welcome! i'm so glad it looks good! i was worried the background would look too.. mismatched, but it doesn't! yay! <33

GREAT JOB WITH THE CHAPTER WOMAN! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE (HOPEFULLY IT HAS THE STUFF WE TALKED ABOUT?) I CAN'T WAIIITTTT! YOU KNOW I'LL BE BUGGING YOU FOR IT NOW! =D

eh, hem......WOOT!
You do not know how excited I am right now...almost practically fell off my bed in excitement!:)
I got the email notification and was like, HOLY CRAP!
I'm almost a little worried that she's preggers already, but I'm not too concerned :P
Don't be a stranger.....I can put them on the no fly list; my mom being an airline manager and all ;)

pssssh Schenner is gettin no love!!!! lol :( I are so sad! haha

i love this story. i just read the whole thing. its the bomb. more soonnnnnn

hahahaha, Luke's sisters had me laughing. I love that they know so much about sex. And how much they hated Kerrie is just a bonus. I hope Luke's mom gets to like Kay-Cee soon and give her a real and honest chance. 'Cause let's face it, Kay-Cee is a sweetheart. I loved the update!!! Keep up the fabulous work!!

I seriously think i need to check out that yoga video on YouTube. I keep forgetting to...

Don't we all love teenagers and nearly teenagers? Sitting there pretty much deciding how Luke and Kay-Cee's life is going to go from now on.... Esp with all the comments about how not so careful the dynamic duo have been and, reading between the lines here, how Luke is slightly pressuring her to go the whole nine yards and do the deal.

I'm slightly concerned by Luke's mother's attitude though - worrying for sure for future chapters....

*coughcough* updateiloveyou*coughcough* XD lol <3

I like that Luke's sisters are really blunt and just say what's on the top of their head. Pretty much assures people that they're honestly saying what others are thinking and they'll speak the truth. It's too bad that Luke's mom is making those "subtle" jabs at Kay-Cee but, I would only assume that mother's would be the hardest to please when it came to meeting the family.
I love how Kay-Cee can easy get to Luke, even when they're in a theme park, with his little sisters across from them, and with tons of people surrounding them. Cracks me up that Kay-Cee does that too.
Can't wait for the next chapter.