Don't Hold Your Breath - Comments

I love this <3

Im at like chapter seven-and the diolge is like a Ryden I just finsihed reading..Hmmm mm Butttttt I like the plot!!!:)

Ha, I finished this finally today and I forgot to leave a comment. Oops!

I thought this was really cute. c:
Nice job with it.
I'm gonna go keep reading it's sequel now. kbai
♥

:) WOw this story was great one, of the best fanfics I've read. It made me laugh out loud multiple times and the plot was unique

Just read this entire story. It took me a while but it was worth it. Amazing story.
Lots of drama but lots of cute stuff too. :)

Awwww! that was cute ^^ an amazing ending of a awesome story! =D
I can't wait for the sequel!

Congradulations! You finished this amazing story! I really cannot wait for the sequel! I just know it's going to be just as amazing as this story!

AWWWWWWWWWWWHHHH. <3
Haha and yes, yes I did think that was Brendon and Ryan's wedding.
That was so cute. :} Jon and your fictional self got married. If only fanfics were real. Then Rydon would be real, you'd get Jon, and you'd be able to hook me up with Spencer. >:D Muahaha.
I loves you too! :DD This was seriously one of my favorite stories on here. Lol you're kind of my Mibba BFF. Rofl. :} So excited for the sequel! :) You know what would be epic? If the pink tutu-wearing hippo made a comeback. xDDDDD

Daaaaaawwwwww!!!! That was soo effin cute!! I'm sad its over, buuuutt since there's a sequel I'm happy!!! XD Holy jesus!!!! 43!! I didn't realize i commented so much.... haha it was like religiously!! I loves you too!!!! <3 I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!

Wow, I can't belive it's actually over.
But there's a sequel, so that makes things a lot better. (:

Gah, this story was so amazing. Easily one of my favorites on the entire site. I loved every chaper, and you are a very talented writer. Great job, I loved this story very very much.

Im confused. Who's p.o.v was that? Who? What?

Aw, it's almost over D:
Glad everything's okay now though:)

Hello love. So, I totally just realised that you write this story lol. Upon seeing that just now, I realised I should most definitely comment cause you ALWAYS comment on my stories…and make awesome banners. Anywho, I think this story is sweet. Also, BTW, I freaking love First try. It’s actually a very important song to me. As weird as it may seem, it was my cat Flare’s all time fav song. He was really sick with FIV –cat aids- and it was the only song that could settle him and make him sleep. He actually fell asleep to it a few minutes before he died. =( not a very nice comment anymore now is it. Anywho, besides my emotional attachment to that song, I love this story!

Next chapter is last? I'm so sad :(
I love the song you chose, it really fits in with Brendon's life in this story.
I really love your way of writing, it's amazing and perfect and it had me in tears throughout the entire chapter.
Love, Kristiina

D: I dont want to cry and then my aunt come out and be like @_@ while im watching MCR videos (that sounded really weird xD)

I think this was my favorite chapter of the entire story.
I just loved everything about it. Gah, they're so cute together!

And I can't believe the next chapter is the last. D:
But, I am very excited for the sequel, so update soon!

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Not the almosst last one- end on a happy note?

AWWW!!! Too cute!! XD Poor Bdon, he was so sad. Nooooooo!!! I don't want it to end!!! X'C But you will make a sequel.... right? UPDATE SOOOOOOONNNN PPLLEEAASEE!!!!!

AWWWWWH. :)
Awesome chapter. And I looove First Try. :) Bden's so adorable.
Next one's the last chapter? D': You better write a sequel! :) I'll help you think of ideas. :D
Update soon! :D

Nooo it's over!
The ending was great though ;D
And I love First Try by Brendon (:
But yeah it is pretty depressing.
Bahh I hope you come up with some fabulous ideas for a sequel