Don't Hold Your Breath - Comments

Aww I'm glad Brendon's okay. So cute those two. :D

Okay, I legit started tearing up when Brendon was making his "I love you" speech.
Why must you be such a kickass writer?
Awwwh, it's going to be ending soon? ): I hope you can think of something to write a sequel about, haha. Sequels rock. :}

Update soon! :D

Okay,im gonna pay that dude a visit in jail and sneak in a sprok so i can stab him o_o xD

Pretty please do a sequel :D
You could do it when they're older, maybe married or something. I don't know, you just said you need ideas. (:

And I'm so glad you didn't kill him.

Aww this chapter is so sweet and cute :D
I'm glad everything got better and cleared up :]

that was amazing! i bawled my eyes out at the sheer perfectness of this story! i'm so god damn sad that it's almost finished, but then again it's really long already. simply brilliant story. <3

awwww. that was just plain adorable. I was about to cry when Ryan pulled away and Brendon's world just seemed to be crashing down all around him. DX!!!!
but it's all good. I love the last lines. Perfect. XD!

please
please
please
end it on a happy notE?

My goodness. *says like evil Dr. Frankestein* "HE'S ALIVE!"
xD

THANK GOD HES ALIVE!!!!!!! Yeeeessssss!!! They are back together again!!! NOO, it can't end!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!

Oh my fucking god.
D':
He can't shoot Brenny.
I shit you not, I will cry. :)
Update soon! :D

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomofgmbhdhjgfwedu kbhjagekwrfwe.
I bet Pete's gunna be all like, *jumps in front of him*
That'd be crazy.

Brenddddoooonnnn!!!!! Gasp...what's gonna happen!

D:

WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!?!?!??!?!?!?!

:((((

Gosh dang that cliffhanger!!
Ryro saves the day!.. kinda xD

i had to stop several times while
reading that last chapter why
the fork didnt brendon and them run

OH MUH GAWD NOOOOOO!!!

NO!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!!
BRENDON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO!! Ryan was so brave that was awesome and Brendon!! DX!!! oh no!!!!!!
more soon!!! please???