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  • camera ready kids.

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    LJDAKLDBLKABDLABDLJA.
    I do that a lot around your stories O_o
    Hehe, but OH WOW.
    SHE'S PREGNANT.
    AND I DON'T HAVE TO KICK JOSH.
    AND THE SEQUEL IS GOING TO BE IN AIRIN'S POV.
    LIFE IS SO GREAT AT THE MOMENT :'D

    Going tooo ~subscribe ;D

    <3
    February 14th, 2010 at 08:04am
  • broken_city_sky

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    It's... over? Thank goodness there's a sequel.
    In Airin's POV?! That's going to be exciting.
    On my way to check out the next installment.
    I liked how everything worked out good. I knew that Josh would be supportive and want to take care of the baby. If he didn't, I would fly out to Vancouver right now in the middle of the Olympics just to slap him in the face!
    Okay but really, now I'm going to read the sequel lol.
    February 14th, 2010 at 05:45am
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    God, I feel bipolar!
    My emotions today were equivalent to that of a pregnant lady.
    D:
    This morning I was super sick and icky feeling, then I was like hyper and bouncy then I was like brain dead then neutral then super pissed off, and just recently super depressed.BUT thanks to you and a couple others I'm all happy again.
    You especially though, I could hardly read the last update, I wont lie, I was actually crying. Not sobbing, but like tears of happiness. I'm so glad Josh is being supportive and so good about it. The party the guys threw was hilarious and made me giggle some more. The thought of Ian&Mariah Man?? Iariah?? made me go 'awee' and the thought of a whole threquel in Airin (or mostly Airin's) POV made me super happy.
    YOU ARE AMAZING! and I cannot say that enough.
    three cheers for King Marcy.
    xox
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    O: O: O:
    FOUR COMMENTERS NOW!
    YEEYY FOR ilikebuttons13
    :D
    February 13th, 2010 at 10:50pm
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    meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehlllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    I don't know what else to say.
    I gave up on reading lord of the flies and moved on to this.
    kind of regretting it now.
    Im just mush. its been one of those weekends.
    and its only Saturday.
    not doing anything is extremely tiring. :/
    when I was six, I thought I was so cool, because I would say 'don't sat my day, sat ur day'
    I thought it was clever... it wasnt.. still isnt.. and more than likley never will be.
    EEEEEEEKK.
    whats going to happen?
    aweee.. Jawshline.
    I forget their couple name..
    see. brain = mush.
    humph.
    February 13th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • ilikebuttons13

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    i dont hate your cliffhangers... but ill hate you if you dont update again soon!
    this story is amazing!
    February 13th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    eeeeeeeeeeeeh.
    I can't really comment on that last chapter... D:
    I actually don't know what to say.
    I hope Josh stays with her.D:
    I also like that Matt was supportive and not WTF?!! AMG. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS. etc..
    Keith is an amazing advice giver... I want my own keith..
    Well.. actually I want my own everyone in this story.. John included cause then I can punch him out for realz... was that too violent? : /
    >:D
    February 13th, 2010 at 04:14pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    Ps.
    PAGE SIX! GREAT SUCCESS!
    :D
    February 13th, 2010 at 03:41pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    yuck. studio work. soo long and boring.
    well... thats how I assume it would be..
    but I guess it could also be quite amusing, depending on who you're with and such...
    :( Poor Josline, throwing up is never fun, and with the added stress of what could postentially be, that just plain sucks.
    Haha, omg, ok, so I felt this should be shared. I was sitting here in my room writing that comment, and something outside my window caught my eye, but I ignored it and kept on writing till it moved again, so I looked and GASP.
    it was a squirrel xD I felt like the dogs in UP. or something...
    ANYWAY. back to the comment.
    I love how Keith was trying to be serious while asking Jaws about potentially being pregnant and not being able to say the word. I wont lie, I thought it was kind of funny & cute... : /
    I'm not sure if I want her to be preggers or not D:
    I mean obviously its up to you.. but still! ...
    TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
    <3
    February 13th, 2010 at 03:41pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    I'm about to read the next two updates.
    Sorru I didn't respond via twitter when you told me.
    I was out cold.. literally...(like asleep I mean.. x] )
    life is taking its toll on me.
    D:
    February 13th, 2010 at 03:23pm
  • camera ready kids.

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    OMG WAIT WUT.
    She's LEGIT preggo? O_O
    Well..
    if Josh leaves her, be sure to tell him I will pound him into the floor..

    <3
    February 13th, 2010 at 05:38am
  • broken_city_sky

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    First of all, she HAS to tell Josh. ASAP. The guy deserves to know.
    Second, I heart Matt. He's such a sweetheart!
    And, finally, only 2 or 3 chapters left?! How will you wrap this up????
    February 13th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • broken_city_sky

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    *GASP* I totally guessed what was going to happen when I read the title to this chapter lol.
    How is she going to tell Josh?!?!?! And how will he react?! They're both too into their career to worry about a baby!
    Write, woman, write!
    February 12th, 2010 at 06:54pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    Oh, ok so i'm actually not trying for page six now, I just remembered, as I was looking at the summary page, this is getting really longish... but not like in a bad way. Its good, it just feels.. I dunno.
    but its not a bad thing.
    thats all.
    (:
    February 11th, 2010 at 10:31pm
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    looks like i'm going to have to give up my page virginity stealing.
    *sigh*
    February 11th, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    ALSO.
    please vote for The New Cities, Hedley, Faber Drive, The Latency and Never Shout Never on http://www.muchmusic.com/tv/mod30/
    ...
    by this point i'm just shamelessly trying to get to
    page
    number
    six
    February 11th, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    yeah Jaws? well MY SPIDEY SENSES ARE TINGELING!
    Oh, wait no.. thats just my arteries clogging...
    Chocolate, fills the void in my heart.. and my arteries... :D
    My day was yuck. But I came home to an update for this. a bunch of new bands asking me to check them out.. well okay. only two and one asking me to help promote them.. and ritz cheese sandwhich things which I haven't had since I was like eight..
    like is pretty dec. :D
    This chapter was fun. Some nessecary comedic relief to balance out the serious aspect of learing about Joline's problem.
    Not sure what else to ramble on about.
    duhm dady dooo.
    I dunno.
    OH WAIT. YES. ok que shamless promoting
    please check out
    *http://www.myspace.com/theuglyclubnj
    http://www.myspace.com/therealthirdplace <---************ (i've been asked by them to promotepromotepromote!)
    http://www.myspace.com/oakcrestband
    http://www.myspace.com/wakeupcallmtl
    http://www.facebook.com/thedowntownfiction?ref=mf
    http://www.facebook.com/asmilefromthetrenches?ref=mf

    THANKS! :D
    February 11th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • broken_city_sky

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    I love the fact that Josh still lives with his parents. Someone's been reading Harry Potter as of late, eh? Lol.
    And that's kind of nice in a weird way. The way that Josh caused her bulimia, but he's also the one that makes her feel better about it.
    February 11th, 2010 at 05:42pm
  • camera ready kids.

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    AIRIN AND MARQUE, OMG.
    Marque is a freakin' MINDREADER!
    I swear D:

    Soul Caliber :3
    HEHE, IT'S THE ONLY GAME I BUTTON MASH (:
    Jsyk ;)

    I LOVE HOW JOSH CHOSE PINK STICKY NOTES :D
    But that was cute. I want a guy to that fer me one day [:
    THE END. YES, OMG.
    Josh and Jaws must STAY TOGETHER,

    <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:41am
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    Ok, where to start... hmm
    Video games I supposee..
    I am such a video game nerd. its pretty bad. Even when i'm haning out with friends, we'll end up playing video games at some point... xD
    I may love Marque && Airin as fictional characters (and probably if they were real to) but Matt, is like my all time favourite... ever. ^^
    The ninja sticky note adventure made me super jealous... : /
    Josh is adorableee, and I love him. (:
    and I don't know what else to say....
    well, thanks for updating!
    :D
    February 6th, 2010 at 11:17pm