Make This Perfect Again - Comments

Shock :O
The lines do relate. thats awesome x]
Uhmm.... -shiftyeyes- IKINDOFFUCKINGLIVEFORAIRIN&MARQUE
so.. yeah..
Haha, they would be late to the last show of the tour. ;P
Im not sure what else to say.. :/
The stage chat made life. x]
The bickering at the end was also a nice added touch..
My comment..usism is gone. D:
SUCKS that you have writers block.
Did you see the archived video of Rob's chat? If not, i'll try and figure out the time of your shout out. Which, made even ME flip, I was soo stoked he actually did! x]
Annd. yeah. thats aboutt it.
Thanks for the update. [:

That whole update made me smile!
And is it just me, or did she just admit that she loved Josh in front of everyone?
I know that it could be interpreted in a friendly way, but still.
I'm pretty sad that the tour's over though. :(

AH MA GOSH, the end ^_________________________________________^
Haha, BIG SMILE!
Made my night (:

After tour...what's to come?

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THE FIRST PART, like the good old days!
Hehe, WORLD DOMINANCE SHALL BE AIRIN'S!

SECOND PART, /dies.
YES, JOSH KISSED HER!
NO! DON'T WALK AWAY.
Damn it, my mind is a mess.

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Oh. My. God.
It's about time that they kissed!!!
And wow, I would definitely not let him apologize. That would be the greatest things since... sliced bread. Yeah, I said it.
I'm kind of excited for drama, but kind of not. The kiss kind of made me happy. Can't it just be that easy? Lol.

Can you say Emotional Roller Coaster?
The begining was hilarous, I was so amused by the 'World Domination Pose' that obvs. I tried it.. then my dad walked in on me.. x]
I was sooo happy when Jawsh kissed! I was hoping that maybe maybe for a few chapters everything would be ok, but NO Josh has to apologise and walk off.
And drama? especially drama you're less than stoked to write?
D:
Thanks for the update, nice job on pointing out the fruity loops on Rob's pic. I was actaully looking for the breakfast cereal after I saw that... naturally I felt like a technology fail.. x]

WOULD THAT BE CONSIDERED PDA?
I mean, it wasn't hand holding or kissing, BUT WHAT JOSH DID WAS AS CUTE AS PDA x3
GAH, SORRY AIRIN D:
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!

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I've been first on each page so far.
I am oddly excited by this.
O__o

Guess whose sick.. again.
me. yeah. not fun.
Soo, Happy B-day Jaws! And Happy Belated Airin!
Sick (the good kind) costume ideas!
I wont lie, when Josline&Airin's dad showed up, i got misty eyed!
Wether she liked it or not, I like that Josh did that, it was cute. (:
Thanks for updating!

Happy belated birthday to Airin, of course!!
I love how they get so into Halloween. I freakin love Halloween!! Lol.
Personally, I hate it when people sing Happy Birthday to me. But I'd be willing to take the embarassment if Marianas Trench was singing it to me. Just throwing that one out there lol.
I loved the way her dad showed up. I wish my dad was that cool lol.
Oh! And Josh flirting with her in front of the crowd! That's got to be a good sign. I know that he would normally have a good sense of humor about that stuff, and maybe it's because she flirted back, but it just feels like things are getting a whole lot better between them.

I can't see Airin with 'normal' hair, so the whole Marque 'freakout' pretty much exactly how I would have reacted.. x]
Haha, I love their dad! He may not always make sense, but he seems pretty awesome ;)
And those flowers, I'd like to think they're from Josh, but you left it as a cliff hanger, so i'm not sure what to expect... : \
Sorry it took a few minutes to comment, I was having a conversation with my dad.. via snores.. O__o
Thanks for updating! (:

HA XD Typical Marque.
Awe, so adorable! Exactly what broken_city_sky said (:

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How can she not forgive him now?
Cute little gestures like that just get to me. Like remembering her favourite flower after all that time? That's so sweet and adorable!

Aw!!! I'm so glad that Josh doesn't want to let her go again.
So he better get moving and try to fix things!!!!
But I really do feel for him. I would panic in that situation too.

Really like the music suggestions at the end. so far i've liked both :D
I'm glad that Josh is finally realising... well actually, finding out.. that Jaws really still loves him, hopefully this helps him get somewhere with the inevitiable get back together.. (:
Sadish chapter, felt really bad for Josh, thanks for updating!
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AWE, JOOOOSH x3
I will no longer smash his face (:
Just...I hope he doesn't let her get away :\

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...JOSH. I WILL SMASH YOUR FACE D:<
I mean...Eh, I'll just wait until the next chapter.
Josh owes us an explanation :\ If it isn't a good one...
RAWR!

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Okay, that broke my heart a little. So what if things can't be the same? Maybe they could be just as good in a different way!!!
I'm really looking forward to Josh's perspective!! Maybe that will shine a little light on the whole situation.

Short sweet comment!
This story is like a drug, no matter how much i put off reading an update, i get sucked in.
Heart meeet stomach. Poor Josline :( She and Josh just cannot be without each other..
:/

I thought that the name Ellarie's Dollhouse was cool, but the story is quite creepy. It's still a cool name, though.
Aw I love Alibis. That was too cute!!!