Make This Perfect Again - Comments

Hehe, awe! The beginning was cute with Marque and Airin :3
DUDE, THE BAND NAME'S ORIGIN IS AS CREEPY AS HELL D:
Alibis <3 That was a cute moment after she finished the song!
HEHE, they're a match made in heaven (:

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by that i mean, due to grammatical and sentence structure and spelling.
FAIL.

wowshit.
sorry for extravagantly long comment, that could make an english teacher cry,...^

I read it (:
only cause you asked so nicley.
Quite possibly feeling better because of it,
Total airinmarque moment, I dont care what ANYONE says. and i loved it :D
I was smiling through like the whole thing.. not even a normal smile, the kind that the old guy on family guy gives to chris (he might have a name, but I dont really watch it and im too lazy to research it x] )
How the band got their name, undernormal circumstanses (<fail) would normally creep me out. Yet in this case, I thought it was kind of creepy, but mostly just really awesome.. :/
Alibis part. made me smile some more, so it was more like.. Faber drive with a new pair of really sick acid wash jeans..
Jawsh is soo meant to be!
and..
i think thats it.. right now everything is like.
FLUFFBLURRWHAAAAAT.
notsfuckingfun.
hopefully your new years is good (y) thanks for the update :D
but really? like why is new years such a big deal? and how long have we even really been celebrating? I don't know, call me weird, but Im not actually that big on new years.. : \ maybe i'm broken,,
D:

first comment of 2010.
yeshh!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
all the best in 2010 and evermore!
id read the update, but im drugged up.
my normal comments are me.. noramally commenting..
Me commenting now is me plus one ibuprofin.. thats about all i need to get high..
:/

YES, that made my night!
It wasn't couple-y cute, but it was SUCH A SWEET MOMENT cute, ya know? ;D
I'm stoked for tour!
AND I'M GLAD SHE QUIT SMOKING.

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Cookies!!! Yay!!! I feel so loved right now :)
Anyways, I'm stil really excited to read about the tour, and I definitely can't wait for Mike and Ian to appear more.
I'm glad that Josh and Josline got the chance to apologize and get a few things out in the open. And I'm really glad that Jaws doesn't want Josh to feel bad about the whole John thing. Because really, who would feel bad about rescuing her from him?!
In summation, I liked this update lol.

hah. thats right, MY COMMENT WAS SO BAD THE REST OF THEM DECIDED IT WAS NOT WORTHY SO THEY KICKED ITS ASS TO PAGE TWO!
I really am pretty normal, albeit a little shy in real life...
:/

O:
Specail cookies from my favouritest flamers ever (i mean no offense by that. i actually love them to the point where there isnt a word big enough for it)
OH,
sorry, to interupt this comment but heartbreak warefare by John Mayer (fking genius) just came on.
It kind of reminds me of this story.. for some twisted reason... >: /
Anywayy..
Im trying to make my comments shorter, to the point, less rambeling and more mature.. its not wroking so wel..
I like that things are working out .. for now... between Josline and Josh, Jawsh xD The talk they had was .. not cute.. but not heart wrenching either.. i;m not sure how to describe the effect it had on me.
But I like how it played out. It was like,, closure on the past, so that the future can happen. I guess?
anyway. This comment is pretty bad, like one of my worst i think im just going to end it now..
:/
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!
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Yay!! Okay, so I have a lot to catch up on comment wise.
First, I was super pissed when John was back in this story. Now I am happy. Thank you lol.
Now let's get this tour going!!! I want Jaws and Josh to have a bit of alone time to patch things up!!

Yes john, yes they are having a party without you,
Its called the 'well fuck you too john' party and not you arent invited.
OH NO SHE DIDNT! oh, you slept with another girl while we were dating? oh, ok i forgive you..
HAH, YOU KNOW ITS SERIOUS WHEN SHE TAKES YOUR KEY! suck it john. suck it.
No, Josline is being smart. She knows your bad news and not worth it.
'bout time he got what he deserves,, well, not completly but it still works,
AMG, jossshhhh thats why i love you!
Id take an awkward friend hug over no hug from josh anyday..
is that weird? i swear to god im not a stalker.. O.o

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JOHN'S GONE!
LET'S PARTY!
Damn it John, I hate that dude -_-
Baha, awkward hugs are the best x]

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This chapter was so nostalgic (:
Just like the old times, ya know?
Oh Josh...poor him. I would deck John in the face if I was him :D
Jaws would approve...
No, I don't think she would...she might understand why though xD

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Favourite chapter yet?
I think so.
(:
Erghh, Josh she's soo secretly not over you, why can't you use your super ninja powers and see that?!!
NOOW I remember why I dont like John.. stupid john. >.<
Lmao, love that keith has a random.. yet not so random red crayon in his pants.. O.o
FINALLY a slightly airin/marque moment (:
marque=faveeee (:♥
pshh, the only reason he would date Jaws if he was straight is because he is a fictional character and he'd think i'm a freak if he knew me. ... :/
Snuggie failed.. like really really bad... :|
THANKS FOR UPDATING!!
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Haha, totally agree with @Mrs_Jessica_Midnight
I'm back to not liking John..
:/
But I think its too soon for anything to happen between Josh and Jaws..
I dunno what to say..
My annoyingly stupid rambeling comments are no longer..
D:

I can imagine Josh being like...
FUCK FUCK FUCKTWIT FUCKTARD, FUCK!
WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK IS HE FUCKING DOING FUCKING HERE?
Sorry for the language, but I if I was Josh, I would be pretty angry x]

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-kidnaps airin-
(:
another update..:D
cutee, but i misses airin/marque moments.. :(
Im just about to start on the snuggie x]
ill twitpic my results.. :/
not sure if i'm excited or nervous for drama, so i'll go with anxoius..
:/

MARIAH DOES NOT LIKE JOHN,
I approve of her (:
Hehe, STOKED FOR THE DRAMA >:D

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I've only got a minute, so this is going to have to cover both chapters..
1. Awe. i'd probably be like that leaving my parents too, even if only for a few weeks! -_-, Love Airin&Marque, have I said that before? Yes? Oh, well its true (: I'm intrigued by this Mariah character.. My.. ex. close friend Mariah thrived on drama, hopefully this one doesn't..
2.Alcohol = fail. *shakes head* tsk.tsk.tsk.
I used to like timmies, when they actually baked their own stuff..
haha YES! love Mariah's reaction to John. I think I can def, learn to like her.
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HAHA, only Airin...
Ou! So we finally meet Mariah :D
I would love for her to play a big part in the story, she seems like an interesting character :3

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