Cheated Hearts - Comments

Still so fucking heartbreaking. Aw, I loved Harper and Keaton.
I hope things get better. Keaton doesn't deserve this; he's a total sweetheart.

when i saw this update i starting screaming OMG she loves me!! lol

Awesome chapter i'm loving the drama and Keaton can be mean but i agree with him. Harper was making something out of nothing even if he does like Chole he never acted on it. Plus Harper really does think she can make things 'not count' she did the same thing with Keaton!!!!!!

Oh Harper :(
Silly

What Keaton said was mean, but he had to say it. If he went soft on Harper she just wouldn't get it. She;s too childish and...naive. And yeah, Keaton sort of had a crush on Chloe, but he wasn't low enough to go as far as kissing her. Harper did. She doesn't deserve Keaton.

Awww no, how sad. I think Keaton could sense it, that's why he didn't tell her he was coming but aw man, sadness :( It was still really good though! :)

i love this story!
and i weirdly still like harper :/

I was really excited when you updated. And I was so happy reading the chapter.
And then that happened, and my heart dropped, smashing into a million pieces at the pit of my stomach.
Yeah. Ouch. I don't know whether this story should be cried over for being so sad or praised for being so good. I think both.
You should definitely update soon. I'm suddenly feeling depressed. Hahah. Fucking Harper man.

Okay so you remember me saying Harper was my favorite?

Yeah, not so much anymore. She killed everything I had for her. She was probably trying to get back at him because she thought that he was cheating. Oh man. Harper, your such a dirty hooker.

ah, man, that bites.

poor keaton.

OMG I knew this was gonna happen because everyone was expecting Keaton to cheat but it just seemed like he was just trying to be a good friend to Chole. On the train Iwas like wouldn't it be funny if Harper cheated instead because everyone was totally mad at Keaton just because they thought he would and I thought it would be funny if you did the complete opposite !!!!!! BTW almost choked when I saw you updated and what it was called. Damn Harper that cheater!!!!

Oh my god, I can't believe Harper did that. Yeah, she sucks. And it was probably to get back at Keaton or whatever, to make him jealous.

my computer was acting stupid yesterday when I tried to comment so here it finally is:
I do think Keaton mught have feelings for Chole but then again he might just feel really bad foor her. I don't think he's going to act on them even if he does.

And when he said I was in love I wanted so bad to know what happened between them. Makes me want you to hurry up and end their relationship.

I love the double updates, I love you updates period!!!

That was nice of Keaton to take Chloe out to eat, but I hope he doesn't cheat on Harper.
Great updates.

I was in love. Was being the key word here, Dear Reader. - That quote made me feel all ‘oogly boogly’ inside.

"My life is a black hole. I am a nobody." Her voice was muffled from the sheets.
"Hey nobody's a nobody."
"Yeah. I'm that nobody." - Can these to lovebirds get much cuter?

"Do you want to go out to dinner?" I asked her. I needed to see her eat. - Keaton is such a worry wart. Aaaand I adored the updates ;)

I hope Keaton doesn't cheat.
then again, I hope he does because it would be fun to read.
:D

I love this story because you'd think it was so predictable at first,
But after you're completely into it you have no idea where it's going.
What brilliant characters you have here. It's so difficult to choose a side.
And thank you for the double update ! That was quite generous of you. (:

stupid keaton don't cheat on harper!

i love this
and i love the characterisation of keaton and i love where the story is going!
:)

omg..
is keaton going to cheat?? :/
noooooo!

I loved both of the updates but I hated them at the same time because I can see where this story is going. :(