Cheated Hearts - Comments

"I've never been to a divorce celebration. Are we in mourning? Should I wear black?"

haha she's adorable

yay! it's official! :)

in all the stories I have read, this has quite literally be the best.
no, I'm not exaggerating.
I really do love this story.

...it's taken me about 10 minutes to write this comment purely because I am too speechless to try and even fathom how great it is.

Oh, gosh he was like rain in California.... that made sense in my head, too.
I LOVE THIS LINE :)

I no longer hate Harper just because of the way she was talking about Keaton. I disliked Harper because I assumed she hurt Keaton (from the summary; I could be totally wrong), and I liked Keaton and didn't want him to get hurt by her. But now I'm interested to know why that would happen.

I love Harper's POV.

Aw...that was a perfet moment right there for him to kiss her.
Amazing work once again. xD

You don't even know how excited I was when I saw that you had them listen to Fleetwood Mac. Like, I actually squeeked. :)

Chocolate Kisses are the best :)

Eeeeeeeeeeeeee!
:DDD
I'm so happy they finally kissed. It was adorable :)
I like that you're putting things in Harper's point of view, too. It'll be interesting to see her thoughts, too.
I love this, no lie. <3

Ohhh I loved the bit of Harper's thoughts, that was a nice insight. I loved this chapter as I do all the rest lol. :)

Ah, I loved this chapter in Harper's point of view. At first, I was confused because I thought it was Keaton and I was like, "Well, just where did Keaton get those marks? Him and Harper must have gotten a little frisky."

But then I realized you had put her name at the top, haha. :D

They kissed! Omg. Yeah. This is so awesome. I just had to say it once more, even though I know I've probably said it like a zillion times.

wow..this is great!!! please update!

Aww. :)

First I was all, "No!"

Then when Harper came with the cake, "Yes."

Then Beatrix woke up, "NO!"

Then he did his rambling, "Oh, yes."

And now the lady guest sitting in the living room thinks I have a mental problem, but whatever. (:

I agree the end of the chapter was cute...things seem to be looking for Keaton now.
Great work

Ahhh I love it! The end of the chapter was sooo cute :)

Words cannot explain how happy I am I found this beautiful, beautiful story.
I think I'm very well in love with it.

Keaton is definitely one of my favorite main characters. He's always so interesting to read about. I'm warming up to Harper, too. :]

Yes, I really like this. I think Keaton owns a part of my heart now. I love how you write this too.

At the end of this I was literally like YOU GO KEATON GET YOUR GIRL
...this is because I am lame and love your stories : )

chapter 8, by far, my favorite =)