Cheated Hearts - Comments

Keaton! Keaton! Keaton!
He's amazing. I love him even more now, if that's even possible.
I didn't like Josh so I'm glad Keaton bit the crap out of him.
Now he can be with Harper and they can make lots of children together :)

omg Josh, what a jerk! I'm glad Keaton was ther to save the day! :)

I'm so glad that Keaton was there to take Josh down though I'm curious to what made his so angry at Harper for.
Amazing update. :D

Oh, I wonder what happened between Josh and her.
And where the story might be heading. :]

Congrats on your B in AP Spanish. :D
I like Beatrix, I think her and Keaton will be good friends.
Amazing chapter

I just reread that and it almost sort of sounded rude, which is not what I meant at all. Just clearing that up. I love all your stories.

That was my favorite chapter so far, it I guess it reassured me that this really IS going to be a great story :]

First, lemme just say: congrats on the B in AP Spanish! :)
I'm glad Harper and Keaton made up a little.
:) And Beatrix is pretty darn cool.
I really like her.

"Nothing?" She asked, shaking her head.

"Nope, nothing," I replied. For some weird reason, I knew she was asking whether or not I felt anything.

"Damn. That's a shame. You're really cute," she sighed.

I put an arm around her shoulder as we walked down the street. We grinned.

"You know, one time, my cousin kissed me on the mouth, mistaking it for my cheek. That's kinda what that kiss was like," Beatrix teased.

"Fuck you," I said pleasantly.

"Psh. You wish," she murmured. :) I loved this whole thing.

Isn't 81 % an A? That's .5% less...
I've changed too many schools to know how they grade any longer. :/
Congrats~

I love it. Keaton reminds me of my brother, always wanting something great. The whole interaction between Harper and Keaton is hilarious.
Beatrix puts a smile on my face. :)

I like Beatrix too :)

yay I loved this chapter! Harper and Keaton's little exchange was cute and Keaton and Beatrix's night out was great haha. :)

Oh, no she did not. I do not like Harper at the moment... what a hypocrite. And Keaton was so nice about it and... I don't like her!

But I loved the ending of the fourth chapter, haha. That was pretty clever. :)

So, I really like Keaton, and I think I hate Harper. I think that's why this reminded me of (500) DOS - I really liked the main character, and I seriously hated Summer. But I'm interested to see where this is going. :]

I so knew a 'Josh' was coming.

And after what she said about girls sleeping around she does that?

I like Keaton. Don't hurt him. :(

It wasn't her fault she was so stupid Lmao.

Haha, lol. My mom's born on Dec 31st. Well, she keeps changing it, weird I know. But that's my mom for you. :)

People stared at us; Gary gave me a quizzical look as my customer had just reassured me that my ass would be fine in her hands

BAHAHA.

"She came back to tell me she's gone. As if I didn't know that! As if I didn't know my own bed!" <3

I was wondering why it's been so long since I've seen your writing.
New ones, wow.

This, like all your other works, is amazing. :)
I love the way you write. It's calming and one of those cuddle-in-bed reads. xD
Well, for moi.

Nice title btw. Cheated Hearts. :D

Seveth Heaven - oh my. ^^

His eyes called me a bitch, mine called him a motherfucker. We both broke out in a smile.

Haha.

Awe..poor Keaton,he really liked her and she just had to do this. :/
Why would she do that??
Great update.

awww Keaton :( That wasn't very nice Harper.