Broken Danger - Comments

that totally changed my perspective of nick. i really like him now and monroe. i love how he calls her minnie mouse haha.

it was amazing, i mean... wow. i nearly teared up reading it.
sad update, but i can't wait for more

Oh...my...good...graciousness.

I totally did not see that coming. Nick was sexually harassed and luckily Joe was there to save the day. That made my feelings for both Joe AND Nick become re-evaluated. I love Joe a bunch more and so with Nick. His soul is greatly bruised and it's going to take a miracle (coughcoughMinnieMousecoughcough) to make everything better for him. I can NOT wait to see how their intense chemistry grows with each other. It's going to be super amazing.

UPDATE SOON LOVELY!

ps...what about The Distance Between Us and Because You Loved Me? I'm quite anxious for those stories as well. I love all three of them!

Love this story
: D

It was AMAZING! I cried. This is one of my favorite stories! A lot of the things you write are my favorites! Can't wait for the next =)

Omg, this chapter was intense!!! All your stories are amazing!! Please keep updating!! I love how Nick is so mysterious to her!! I love it :D more soon please??

that was amazing :) truely amazing.

showing Nick's poor tortured soul in this chapter really got to me, and i loved how Minnie responded to his problems, she was over the top but she was there to listen.

you're an amazing writer. please keep up the good work :)

Greatt ! I cant wait to know what happens next. Update soon pleasee ( :

Okay, I was going to wait 'till Saturday when I got back home to comment, but this chapter deserves immediate commenting from me, like seriously it is yelling at me to just spill it out (if that is possible).

I didn't see this coming at all, total shock is filling my body no joke. I am really starting to think that my theory is kinda accurate. :D (my smarticles is working, lol) I love Monroe's sarcasm it fits her, she is like a 007' movie, silent but deadly. I can't wait to see what kind of answers Monroe and Nick will have for each other, and also what questions they will be asking.

I just thought of something, when she was climbing down the tree...did she have bed hair? Like was her hair all wierd and wild? because that would be kinda embarassing....Lol, my mind is really acting wierd. :P

Anywhoo, I hope my rambling made up for all the short comments, and actually made sense, can't wait for more!

Love it! This story is amazing =) Post soon, please!

amazing :D so glad i found this story :))

oh, and i like nick from the story ^-^

no, i never saw that one coming... but i like it :D

the balcony thing was cute. nick should have impulses more often. this is going to be interesting. there are so many things that they could ask each other. nick and monroe...or minnie mouse...haha. UPDATE!

Wasn't expecting that at all.
You need to update this! :)

so um.. im kind of addicted to this story!
LOVE IT!
updateee!!

Ack! Nick's a kidnapper!
Hahaha, wow, that was...unexpected. But this is good; he's giving her a free pass or whatever to question him. Perfect.

Now I can't wait for the next chapter. =)

-Treasure.<3

Oh yeahh.
Now we're getting somewhere.
haha.
I can't wait for the opening up in the next chapter.
And I thought the whole balcony thing was adorable.
:)

Monroe and Nick's dialogue is my favorite. =)

You always wanna know what the next smart aleck thing he's going to say, and you wait to see if she'll retaliate to his remarks. She isn't only intrigued with Nick; he's intrigued with her. Hahaha, I can tell. ;D

Which is awesome, because that means we're going somewhere! Ha, which makes me happy. I want to see who/what made Nick such a jerk.

Anywhoo!
Update please?
Oh! Oh! Oh!
Because You Loved Me, too! They're my favorites. =)

-Treasure.<3

Okay this will be another short comment, because I am about to leave on vacation for the remainder of the week. So until saturday I wont be on. So let us make this count....

AMAZING! I seriously was dancing...in my mind lol. I can't believe Nick is actually the one making conversation! AND I LOVE IT! This is solely the best story i have ever read on mibba. No Joke.

Okay, got to go! MORE SOON PLEASE! I want something to read when I get back! :D

amazing...as usual. i really like the undeniable chemistry monroe and nick have. it's cute. joe certainly knows what he's doing. cliffhangers are not cool. haha! UPDATE SOON!!!