Broken Danger - Comments

Yes!
Nick finally begins to talk to her.
I hope he continues but isn't such a jerk about it next time.
haa.
And Monroe is amazing as usual.
I just love her and her personality.
Great chapter!
Can't wait for more :)

Ah! Continue please! I love it! I like how you gave Nick a different character. Like how you didn't keep everything about the real Nick Jonas the same in your story. Does that make sense? Anyways I really like it and I can't wait until you update again! :)

I loved the update. More soon! :)

no no NO! you can't leave it there!
no cliffhangers no way jose!
hahah
loved the chapter!
UPDATEEEEEEE

Monroe is extremely uptight. I can't wait for Nick and her to actually get along and so she loosens up and then everything is good. I still really like Clarissa, she's one of my favorite characters so far. I don't know about BJ though, I think he could cause some problems in the future. And I think that Joe has planned out that Nick is going to help Monroe and Monroe is going to help Nick from the beginning and that's why he keeps leaving them alone together :]

i think this story is great.
actually, i think all your stories are great. (;
all of them, have plots way diffrent from another and with different feelings for each.
you are very creative, or at least way more creative than ill ever be.
keep up the fantastic work.
hope you update soon.

Love it!! I love Nick!! He's such a mystery!!! Update it soon xoxo!!!

Mysterious and full of suspense...I like the sound of that. That guitar thing was cute! She got all intense when Nick touched her. That sucks about his parents kicking him out and wanting to send him away somewhere else. Where's Kevin? What happened with Frankie that makes Nick upset? Why is Monroe always alone? Some many questions that need to be answered. Update soon!

Haha the beginning made me laugh about the whole musician thing.
Glad Nick is atleast talking more, but he's still acting like a jerk. :(
Oh well update soon please! :)

Yes! Nick is finally speaking more than one syllable! Lol.

Haha cheryl, ahh what shall I do with Cheryl? Oh I know! Love her!!!!! :D

Is it just me or is Nick and Monroe actually beginning to get comfy together? .....somewhat? Kinda? eh?

I know this isn't as long as my usual comments for this story, but it is 1:24 in the morning, and I am beat, it is taking all I got to not pass out on my laptops keyboard. But trust and believe you may get another comment from me for this chapter...just when I am concious enough to write it. :)

Can't wait to see how it unfolds in the next chapter.

Oh I love it!
Haha, I have this love hate thing going with Nicholas. He's a big fat jerk but dude, he's Nick, hahaha.

And it's full on love for Joe faSHO! Except for how he keeps leaving Monroe with Nick. I'm so sure it's on purpose. Really though, I'm waiting for Monroe to just spontaniously BUST, going on a rampage, aha.

Anywhoo, I love it. =)
Update soon!

-Treasure.<3

oh how i love this story... :)

This story is really mysterious making it even more interesting(: update soon.

poor nick :[

I'm not liking her dad so much.
Hmmm I wonder if Joe's plan will come through
Update please! :)

once again, joe saves the day. i woner if his plan will work. heck, i wonder if monroe will fall through with the plan...hopefully. i can NOT wait for the next chapter!

ps...

...the 'minnie mouse' thing is too cute. i can't wait for this plan.

You're a genius at writing. I really like this. I know i say that about TDBU too, but it's so true for both. I can't wait to get more into this story. Continue with it please :)

Mm, I loved this update :) It was cute and it showed more of their character. I love this story, it's so great and the name 'Monroe' is one I haven't seen. It's great. Her attitude reflects a lot and I like it a lot. I love how Nick calls her 'Minnie Mouse', it's interesting. Joe is quite the character, as always, and I'm very intrigued to find out more. It should be interesting about what happens next, I'd love to see Nick open up to her because I'm dying to know what's behind his walls and façade. I'm excited for the next update, on any of your stories. As you know, I love them all :)

Update soon :)

I wanna punch Nick.
Just sayin'.
haha.
I love Joe in this story.
He is just so adorable and cute.
And I love the way Monroe acts.
Can't wait for more :)

i lOVE this story!