Broken Danger - Comments

This chapter was so sad to me. I agree with the others about Nick just dumping her like that after stealing something so precious...but I can't help but still show love for him, seeing as he's messed up in the head. I guess that's my excuse for him.

Anyway...Monroe being pregnant...that's going to be super good. I can't wait until Nick finds out about the entire thing...and the real reasoning for his actions...if their is another reason. I also want to see Kanielle and Jarissa in Here and Now. I think these two couples will make things more happy...especially the Joe and Clarissa. I also want to see Rodney be a better man and father now that he'll be back with Cheryl...who I absolutely love.

Ah! So much I want to see in Here and Now! I can't wait for you to start it! But first, let's get through this epilogue! As for point of view suggestions...I would like to see Monroe's point of view again...keep the mystery of Nick Jonas classified. Let us mull over what he's thinking in our minds...you keep me on my toes Taylor! Please hurry and update this so you can start on Here and Now.

I'M JUMPING IN MY COMPUTER CHAIR!!! LOVE YOU!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CANT END IT THERE!!!!!!!

I saw her being pregnant coming, but yet it still has shocked me.
I can't believe it.
Like, how...I don't even know.
haha.
Hopefully in 'Here and Now', Monroe will still talk to Joe in all.
And I'd like to see it in Monroe's POV again.
I think it gives the story more emotion.
Can't wait for the Epilogue and can't wait for 'Here and Now'.

i want it in monroes point of view. i dont like reading in third persons.

and im glad that kid i read about in the excerpt was nicks :) and i want to read the epilogue already!

OMFG! I sooo knew that was gonna happen but still... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
I can NOT wait for the sequel!

yesss. update.

i love when you post the next chapter :)

I wish here and Now could jsut be in Monroe's point of view.but hey. thats my opinion. I like it this way! So you learn as the person learns..you know what the person knows,which makes it mroe intense :]

but..ill go & subscribe to that sotry nowww ;;]

Ohhh gosh!!!!! Update the epilogue as soon as u can plz. I couldn't stop crying and when I checked the email and it said broken danger my breathing hitched into my throat. It's an amazing story and I think u shuld put te story in whatever narration it feels best in. When u write it, whichever one feels the best is the one that u shuld use. Just o with it and post spoon plz!!

I have been waiting for this forever!!!! I knew she was pregnant! I knew she would be as soon as I read that little bit of the sequel! I absolutely love your stories. You are AH-MAY-ZING

Wow! I'm so shocked but I knew it was coming considering the summary to the sequal, but to see her finding out she's pregnant was just.... whoa!
I loved the story so much and I'm really sad it's over. :( I can't wait for the epilouge!
As for the sequal Here and Now, I think you should keep it in Monroe's point of view.
Can't wait for more which I hope is soon :)

Well, I would love the sequel to be in Nick's POV, but apparently that isn't a possibility, I would prefer Monroe's. Yep, I think it would be better, because Broken Danger was so awesome, because you could see it from someone so simple's side. So, in my opinion.
The chapter? Sad, but it did what it had to do. You answered questions that were unanswered, of course making new questions and leaving some still unanswered :). But it was awesome.
Love it and can't wait for an update!

OOOOOO.

I NEED MORE SOOONNN!!!!

AMAZING chapter btw(:

i loved the update, so sad :(

Wooow... This is an amazing story, i cant believe Nick broke up with her! Your an amazing writer, really really good [:

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I literally cried, and was mad at the same time in this chapter. So he has sex with her; then he tells her to get out of his life??? Nick and I will be having a good long talk........ . .......

Anyway, you have to update ASA, M’kay?? ;]

NICK is such a jerk!
Breaking up with Monroe doesnt change anything...
its like his running away from their mistake.
It was really HIS fault... he said that Monroe will be okay" but did he do? He just hurt Monroe.
Nick is responsible for what they did... because of.. you know... (during their 'deed' ) MONROE will be pregnant because nick felt it.

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>>It really did make me cry... you're really are a WONDERFUL and BRILLIANT writer, taylor.
cant wait for Here and Now. UPDATE SOONER.

What is really odd is that I can read that chapter, over and over, and still cry... I can't believe Nick did that.............. My Gods Tay, please update!

oh..my..god.
this literally made me cry. haha
i know he cares for her and all i can definitely tell but damn!
how could he do that?!
please please please update! i seriously cant wait for the sequal! (;
you should update the other stories too!!
you are an amazing writer. haha
ttyl (:

i love updates. i live for updates.

i cant wait till the next chapter. i cant believe nick did that. i mean i get how he thinks shes too good for him, but it makes me sad

:'( WAAAAHHHHHHH