Broken Danger - Comments

So this is my third comment for this chapter? Yep it is..

I was reading the other comments and saw one about his medical id tag and thought,... "Hmmmm, maybe in the future when they see each other again Nick sees it and... i don't know." I just want to know how Nick is going to react when he sees Nate..

Nate should run into the office while Nick's there and scream Mommy or whatever, but like, before Monroe knows Nick is there... and then Nick and Nate see each other... whatever i don't even think this makes sense I just want you to update soon cuz I have to go to bed soon and it is killing me waiting for an update as u can obviously telll... You said that you were working on an update.... how's that going and where the f is it...

I mean this with love when i say that if this story isnt updated soon I might die..

did u hear about Alex Noyes Father and Alexander Mcqueen and Phil Harris....

Death comes in threes is the saying.. .and i guess it's true... sad... well i have nothing else to say other than i will chase you down if you don't update soon cuz i have to go to bed soon cuz its 1130 pm and i should be asleep... Im staying up for this stories update.... if you aren't going to post it plzz tell me.... It would help me a lot and i would get sleepp...

LONG ENOUGH OF A COMMENT TO GET YOU TO UPDATE?

LOVE,

Aly

WHAT! UPDATE! :D

So I've been procrastinating majorly on my hw hoping that you will update again tonight so could you please please please with cherries on top put up another chapter?!?! It is killing me! I am literally sitting here dying waiting to find out what happens next!

So I read the other two chapters before twenty seven like days ago. And I liked them so muchh I didn't even know how to tell you. And I was going to today, but I saw you updated. Ha, I was sorta mad at myself for waiting.

But the last few chapters were too good for a quick comment. =)

Honestly, the first chapters of this story(where Nick comes in; I think around chapter...5?) and these last parts are hands down the best. Nick's character truly amazes me sometimes and I went from hating him, to loving him, to hating him again for hurting her like that. He took something sacred to her and then acted as if he couldn't stick around for whatever comes after. It's...I guess it's life sometimes.

You wrote it so well. The last chapter, his explanation, though wrong, was where I began to feel it.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this story finishes and turns into Here&Now.

-Treasure.<3

PS. Sincee you just gave this heartfelt update, I'll do more than my best to update Nevermind Me for you. =)

I'm just lost for words, that was absolutely amazing. (:
It was sadthough and I feel horrible for Monroe :(
Ooh you have to update like now! ha.

oh, is she still wearing his medical tag? maybe a li'l somethin' somethin' to keep 'em together "at the heart" or whatever..

hahaa. i don't even know what I just wrote.. :D

Tears in my eyes. right now. nick. gah. what is his problem?!

what was with joe? i don't understand.. -.-

and you!!! you. you did this.. i want to wring someone's neck right about now.

more. update. now. like.. now.

Their weren't any errors that I noticed. I loved and hated this chapter because it was soooo good. I was sad because of the obvious. Nick is an idiot btw. But I loved it because it was so well written and u culd read all the emotions. Plzzz update again today. It would mek me so happy if u had the new story started tonight. Or tomorrow night. I'd live that.

Thanku so much for havin such a great story. It's Noe my favorite no matter what. Plzzzzzz update this soon. Here's a longer comment for you.

What the heck?! I can't believe Nick did that! I mean obviously we knew that they were gonna break up, because of the sequel, but really? You're too good for me?! What a lame excuse! Ah! Not to say that it wasn't beautifully written, because it was. But I'm kinda hating on Nick right now. Haha. I mean seriously! He's such an idiot! Monroe made him such a better person. And it's like he doesn't even care! He is really frustrating me. But at the same time I still love him. :) I can't wait for more! I love how you update so fast :)

I loooove this story. All of your stories, actually, I bet it has something to do with your writing and ideas. Ha.
Anyways, I didn't really get where Nick was wrong, you know how in the beggining Joe tells him he is wrong. Could someone tell me? Ha.
Love it. Update soon, please!

OMG! I was soo happy then Nick just had to ruin it! I feel really ba for Monroe...and Nick. Can't wait for the last chapter and then the sequal! :)

Hi! I've been following your stories and I must say, you have me hooked. Your writing, although your spelling irks me... ha ha ha, is such a pleasure to read. I know I've never commented, shame, but that ends NOW. I can't wait for another chapter, please update soon!

Oh, by the way, I totally can't wait for the sequel! I think I know what's going to happen... ;) I can't wait to read it!!

P.S
Update soon please! =]

Awww! Poor Monroe! =[
I want to give her a hug now!
I mean I know it's not real life and all but still I want to give her a hug... and maybe some chocolate therapy =[
I don't like this this chapter... don't take it the wrong way it was a great chapter and there's nothing wrong with it but it made me upset that's why I have some issues with it!

Wow. This chapter makes me hate Nick so much but I know I shouldn't
I can't believe after all that, he pushes her away
And the breakdown at the end of the chapter. Poor Monroe :(
Can't wait till you post the next chapter which I hope is very soon :)

Way to make me cry like an idiot. My step dad walked in and was like "What the hell are you crying for?" thanks........ haha but it wassss soooooo goood! I need more! My birthday's on saturday....... how about you update alot untill then..... please? okay good.

WOW. I'm speechless I dont know what to say.
That was.....well, incredible, fantastic, heart warming, with that said heart braking.
I'm, in a way, so happy for Monroe she finally let everything out from
telling Nick how she feels, to braking down.
I think that was very important to see, or uh read, ha.
Your seeing her grow as a person & sorta how Nick influenced her, my opinion for the better. Nick on the other had I fell bad for,
I know how Monroe is heart broken & I would be to If I cave that one thing to someone that symbolized my love and them just pushed me away, but
I understand what Nick is trying to say, he knows
he is a screw-up & I think he feels if he doesn't end it now
that he might heart Monroe later, & I think honestly he doesn't want to fell like her charity case. I can see he love Monroe
& its obvious she loves him.
I'm a way I'm happy this happened to the both of them, they experienced there first love
and there first real heart break & for nick the first time making love.
Now that they have experienced that, they know
how it fells & it's really just a part of life, granite I hope that in the next chapter they have some kind of closer & then in the sequel then find each-other again.
They really are just to cute for words.
And to you Missy this was not poorly written, its fantastic you are very talented. I think you will go very far in writing on day. Again WOW, amazing chapter.

P.S. Sorry for being so long. haha :)

I'm crying my eyes out! I can barely form these sentences. My sister seen me crying and asked what's wrong and I'm like, 'How could he?! That douche!'

To be honest, I am very disappointed in him.

Necessary evil for the overall good is totally accepted and welcomed :) Like with what Nick said to Monroe. I'm going to sound so mean by saying this, but I felt it coming and I absolutely... waited for this moment to happen. Like, he broke her heart. How more awesome can you get? (and I mean that by knowing and have read the excerpt from the sequel not cause I think it's awesome to be mean to anyone) I do believe that Nick cares for her and this scares him. He needed to 'get rid of her'.
But I do believe that those two will have a happy ending. Something that they both deserve.
And, I still do love the fact that she'll be preggers with Nick. I usually don't really like teenage pregnancies or when in a story the girl gets randomly knocked up, but with you... it's awesome ;) Maybe it's cause you write it out so amazingly? ;)
Love it and can't wait for an update!

That was...omg. It's so sad. I think she needs to talk to Joe because he was the only there through the whole thing, you know?
And now I see where the sequel stands, and let me tell you, I am so crazily excited for it. And the last chapter and epilogue of Broken Danger, of course (:
Hope to read it all really sooooon!!