Broken Danger - Comments

OMFG. OMFG

UPDATE ASAP!

Perfect timing!! I loved it but now i know some sad stuff is coming. But it was great cant wait for more=]

Amazing
: D

I can't wait for the next chapter and I can't wait for the sequel!
Update soon!
=D

Yay, yay, yay!!!!!! I knew this was gonna happen. And I have feeling that she ends up pregnant...

OMG..so beautiful!

Im seriously speechless and i really dont know what to say but..WOW!

ahhh! i love how she loves him!

is that his kid?! how the baby was described sure looks like nick. but then, he must have left her or something if he didnt know she worked there.

ugh, i need the next update this is gonna drive me crazy lol.

I mean seriously. From the excerpt you put up in the sequel we could realize - Monroe had Nick's kid and Monroe and Nick aren't together. I totally support your idea of those two breaking up because... well sometimes it's better that way ;) Besides now we can read this awesome action between those two in the sequel :D
The chapter... love it. It wasn't too fast. Also, I loved the way he talked to the lady next door. And the ending... so totally adorable :D
Love it and can't wait for an update!

I just reread the chapter and figured a lot of things out... like Nate and stuff...

so now u must update... the fate of the world depends on it...
not really but mine does

OMG :o
UPDATE :]

Holy shittt !
That was so intense, but i loved every second of it.
I can't wait for the sequel (:
Now that i know why he took he to his apartment,
I feel so stupid for not guessing it right away,
it was obivious ! Ahaha.
& It was cute how he gave her his dogtags, I love Nick.
Update soooon !

sorry about my comment repeating.

there is so much i want to say.
i just can't believe that they did the deed.
but it wasn't too soon to me.
honestly, the feelings between the two were always there.
they were just hidden.
i wonder how the two are going to seperate.
you have me wondering.
you amaze me taylor!
i love you!
update soon, my love!

there is so much i want to say.
i just can't believe that they did the deed.
but it wasn't too soon to me.
honestly, the feelings between the two were always there.
they were just hidden.
i wonder how the two are going to seperate.
you have me wondering.
you amaze me taylor!
i love you!
update soon, my love!

there is so much i want to say.
i just can't believe that they did the deed.
but it wasn't too soon to me.
honestly, the feelings between the two were always there.
they were just hidden.
i wonder how the two are going to seperate.
you have me wondering.
you amaze me taylor!
i love you!
update soon, my love!

OH MY FUCKING GOD. That was the most amazing chapter, well apart from some pretty good others. I'm addicted to this story! Love it! Keep Updating, can't wait for the sequel!!!!

Whoa!
That chapter was just.... wow
I can't believe they did THAT!
I'm so happy she figured out she loves him! He had better love her back!
Their are so many questions going thru my head right now but I really want to know why they aren't going to be together in the end???
Does he not love her and wants nothing to do with her? I really hope that's not the case.
Update soon please because I'm dying here without answers! :)

AAAHHHHHHH! All i have to say is that he better love her back because if he doesnt i might cry... this chapter was AMAZING. <333

Damn! Amazing. My fave part was with the old lady. Monopoly. Lol. Really good and I don't know if I can wait till tomorrow for an update although u update more than any othr story I've ever read and I loooooove that! So please update asap!

Mia was right! hahahahaha! This was amazing just what they needed! literally tehehe! I cant wait for the next chapter! & the one after that! & the squeal! Ahhhh This is just to amazing! Your so talented! Fantastic work! Update soon please! :)