Broken Danger - Comments

I feel completely and utterably terrible for Monroe. I wonder why Nick would decide to do that right after the two made love to each other, but whatever his excuse is...he shouldn't have done it...but I still love him for some odd reason. It all seemed like it was coming to the light but now I'm back in the dark, which is the lowest I've ever felt. I didn't cry over this but it did sadden me that they broke it off...well Nick broke it off.

Though I'm sad that this story is coming to an end, I am extremely excited for Here and Now. You amaze me with your brilliant ideas, Taylor. You have inspired me to be a better author and I really appreciate that...as cliche as that sounds.

Please hurry and update soon. This story is too good.

That chapter was so sad. I even cried a little. And I sort of knew what was going to happen! Nick needs to listen to Joe more often... I can't wait for the rest and the sequel. :) update again soon!
-Rachel

Hey, can't wait till you update. Thre last Chapter was so heartbreaking. It sucks when a guy breaks your heart.

Thank you for the update Tay, no matter how emotional I go. OhmiGods, how could Nick do that?!?!!?!?!?!!?
That was horrible, my Gods...
I can't believe that......... Update???

Is it possible for me to tear a fictional character's guts out? If it is, I call dibs on Nick.

That was a reall low blow coming from Nick. I want to cut off his balls just for that. lol.

Monroe had a breakdown....a complete breakdown; you know I always knew that Monroe was broken but until this chapter I hadn't really given it much thought on how much she was really broken, I mean compared to Nick, she is more screwed-up than a can beans on thanksgiving. I mean she had to go through since she could remember the pain of hearing your parents fight, yell and insult one another, then her parents divorce, then the realization that her father doesn't even love her, and is acting like a father for the benifit of showing up his former wife, and his new wife, then finding out that Clarrissa is cheating on Rodney and Rodney-her own father, her own flesh and blood is blaming his maretal problems on Monroe! Then to top it all off Nick has to be an ass and technically told her that what they did was a mistake and he doesn't want to see her again, using that lame ass excuse that ever guy uses "you're too good for me".

I think Monroe deserves to cry, and if it helps go shoot some paintball guns. It's time for Monroe to heal, let Nick feel the pain of losing the best damn thing in his life, because we all know that nobody gets him but her, so he just made a huge freakin' mistake. I swear if I was monroe, Nick would have gotten bitch slapped, and kneed in the balls, oh I would be livid.

And as for Cheryl coming to Rodney's....WHAT THE HELL! Why is she over there? and what do you mean arrangement? haha when Clarrissa at the end said Nick out loud realizing what had just happened to minnie mouse, I would have been so sarcastic. I amuse myself,lol.

So for this chapter Monroe-you go on and cry, God only knows how much you deserve it.
Rodney-this is not the time for you to pretend, actually try and use your fatherly instincts dammit!
Clarrissa- Leave Rodney and move in with Joe, because we all know that is where your heart is. And let's face it Rodney is a total douche bag.
Joe- Please use your God given brain and knock some sense into your brother! smack him across the head or something!
Cheryl- eh I got nothing to say to you just yet, you aren't in my bad books.....yet.
As for Nick- well I have a long list of things I would love to say to you, but to sum it all up in a few simple words it would have to be: Your an ass and go to hell. :)

Okay my rant is done with! Amazing chapter Taylor!!!!!!!!! Update soon! like now!

Why are you still reading this?! GO! START WRITING!

wow i love this story :)

the only thing im thinking is that i want to punch nick in the face! How could he do that to Monroe...

I'm really excited for the next few chapters and the sequel

Amazing! Loved it!

I laughed for a second when it said Nick was fart to good for me. The little things amuse me:)

Wonderful can't wait for the next chapters and sequel!

LOVED it
: D

....ohmygosh.
Like seriously, I was speechless throughout that whole chapter.
I'm pretty sure my jaw was dropped the whole entire time.
I cannot believe Nick would do that to Monroe.
I don't even know what I think is going to happen for the rest of this story before 'Here and Now'.
I'm just so shocked right now.
Can't wait for more.

Im so pissed off and sad at the same time :|

BITCH NICK!

I think i just had a mental breakdown reading that chapter! I obviously knew he'd do something like this cause of the sequel but reading made it worse lol i cried not gonna lie...I CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!!!!!

That was so amazing yet so sad at the same time!

I simply adore this story and I am so so glad that you made a sequel too it.

I was feeling so bad for Monroe then I read and I quote " Nick was fart too good for me" I lost it then hahaha, the chapter was so emotional but that, that made me laugh ha

But yes this was simply amazing, update soon

i seriously love this story. Im bummed when its not updated. That chapter was really emotional and sad. I thought things were gonna change for the better...oh well I still effing love this story! I cant wait for the sequel only a couple more chapters away! More soon love! keep up the awesomeness work! this story is the bestesterestesterestesterest!!

Oh my gosh, this story is so amazing. I probably never write comments, but I read it for pretty much long time. This is the most emotional chapter I ever read. It actually made me cry. I can't wait for the next chapter and of course new story.

That was honestly, the most amazing chapter in mibba history! You described everything so well. You are great with words. I can't wait for more :)

That was honestly, the most amazing chapter in mibba history! You described everything so well. You are great with words. I can't wait for more :)

Wow, that made me really sad but it was so good. I feel bad for both of them. Anyways, can't wait for more :]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY CRAP! I SERIOUSLY SCREAMED! FINALLY! I didn't think Nick could wait any longer either. :P I'm such a perv. lol.

Rofl, monopoly. I burst out laughing when I read that. That is the way to go! roflmao.

Oh and I figured out something about the sequel, that I will PM you about, tell me if I am right or not, told you I think like crazy with this story. haha.

AMAZING UPDATE TAYLOR! I am proud of you too! xD

UPDATE SOON!