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  • vividly.alive

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    Ahhhh new chapter! I loved this one. I hope to see more, but no pressure, love :)
    January 21st, 2011 at 07:05am
  • MadNinjaSkillz!

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    ahhaha the first to comment (you know what i mean lol) >:D anyhoo! good to know she's still alive xD uhhh update soon? O.o LIKED THE UPDATE :DDDDDD
    August 15th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • vividly.alive

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    AH YAY UPDATE!

    And this was cute. It was good and got us all caught up. My interpretation of light within darkness? Just light, since light will travel and fill the darkness.

    I'm too literal for my own good.
    May 20th, 2010 at 04:21am
  • nightwriter333

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    Girl i promise you if you don't post soon, i will go crazy. i love it! I promise! i'm going insane just sitting here i know it's like 1:30 in the morning but get out of bed and write!
    April 21st, 2010 at 08:27am
  • Kismet

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    Seth is super, super sweet, and I'm very glad that CD's not dead. I would have to virtually shank you if she was. X3

    But again, Seth seems super, super sweet, and extremely awesome. I hope that we see more of him, and I really enjoyed these updates. I know that you said it's on hold and you've lost some motivation, but what you have right now is wonderful and you're uber talented.

    I wuv this, and I wuv you! <3
    February 15th, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • vividly.alive

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    I really liked this chapter. A lot. I really want more of Seth... he seems like he's a cutie :)
    February 1st, 2010 at 06:41am
  • The Colour of Music

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    OMG!!
    please keep writing!
    i have fallin in love with this!
    please try to update a little faster?
    :D
    January 29th, 2010 at 11:40am
  • MadNinjaSkillz!

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    i just read the entire thing and i think this is really good ^_^ *subscribes* please update soon! :o)
    January 29th, 2010 at 05:08am
  • vividly.alive

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    This was great. Also, I know longer despise you for possibly ending by killing her off.

    Kidding. I never depised you.

    Seriously, though, not cool.

    I like Maileen and Seth.
    January 29th, 2010 at 02:46am
  • Kismet

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    aiflsdkfjla;skdjfl;askdjf

    Excuse me, Hever? ['Tis your new nickname, by the way. If you've got one for me, I want one for you. Plus, it's got a nice ring to it. :)] She... She can't kill herself now. Or ever, for that matter. Because what will that wonderful cat, Missie, do? And I'm sure that her brother's going to feel horrible for what he's said... He couldn't have meant what he said - he was probably lying to try to provoke her, or something like that. I hope this isn't the end...

    I loved it, up until she contemplates killing herself.
    January 21st, 2010 at 08:12am
  • vividly.alive

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    fccf wajvrgt 4nkj4 n tjwtmke;4ewm vr

    WHAT!

    WHAT!

    GAH!

    NOT! COOL!

    I swear, if this is how the story ends, miss, I will not be pleased at all.

    fnerje fhew nlkf tr

    More please?
    January 20th, 2010 at 04:54pm
  • vividly.alive

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    WHOA!

    WHOA!

    That's insane. Christian has a fun life to read about.

    ...WHOA!
    January 16th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • vividly.alive

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    I really enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait for the next one! Hope you're having fun with you're friend :)
    January 9th, 2010 at 06:41pm
  • The Colour of Music

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    i love this story!!
    please update soon!!!
    *subscribed*
    January 8th, 2010 at 05:28am
  • TwistedByTheStars

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    lol i'm such an idiot. I went to listen to that song you mentioned and I was all searching for it then I realized you put a link thing in the story. :D Lurv the story!!! My friend said lurv sounds like verb then he screamed VERBAL ABUSE!! Seriously I think he was on crack or something. WOAH this was way longer then I meant it to be. Bye!!
    January 8th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • vividly.alive

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    I really liked this, Christian sounds a lot happier than usual.

    Also, two things stuck out:
    1. "I used big words I didn't know I knew." That happens to me all the time. I'll be editing a report or something and I'll think, "I wrote that? I use those words? Crazy..."

    2. I LOVE THE CARAMELDANCEN! I watched the video with my friend after she broke up with her boyfriend and we watched in on loop, imitating the dances. This was also this past summer, meaning we were both 19. It made everything better, needless to say.
    January 8th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • vividly.alive

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    This was really good... Seriously. I feel like that a bit too often and the way it was written was so real. Keep it up :)
    January 7th, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • Kismet

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    I hate it when I can't find anything to drink in the house... That seems to be happening a lot lately. But I just got some Mountain Dew Throwbacks and Strawberry Crush, so I'm gonna be one happy camper for the next week or so! :D

    Anyways.

    I love Christian, though I think that you already knew that. I'm worrying about her like mad, just as I normally do, and I want to shank Nick for telling her to go and kill herself already. Can you have Trevor come over with cat-me and have me scratch the shit outta his face? :/

    Loved it! <3
    January 7th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • xox.ally.xox

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    I like it! hehe
    Can't wait to read more!!!
    January 7th, 2010 at 02:41am
  • Kismet

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    Oi... January third is the anniversary of her suicide attempt? I wanna jump in there and hug her. Like, badly. Bunny seems nice, and hyper, and just fun. Though, I still wanna slap Bunny's parents. As I've said before, homophobia is one of the most idiotic things that I've ever encountered. In short, these updates were amazing and I'm looking forward to more. Now, I'm off to go do some schoolwork. Joy.

    But you're doing a wonderful job! :D
    January 6th, 2010 at 10:10pm