Before the Summer's Out... - Comments

Awe, this didn't get nearly enough credit it deserves. I stayed up to read this, I really didn't want to stop. Benj was hilarious and I thought it was great that it was written in his point of view, third person wouldn't have done this justice. Enid was so adorable, she kind of reminds me of the smarty pants little sister. I think my favorite part was either when Benj was smashed drunk, or his horny day. We all get them. This story was just too funny, I loved it. I wish you would have gotten more comments, God knows you deserve them.

Awww! I love this

loved that they kissed its so cute in a dorky way lol

ohhh, wonder where she's going.

very interesting please keep updating

Jesus!!!! Update!!!
haha

I looooove this story. I've been on and off reading it for the past two days or so. I just love the way you wrote it in the guys point of view. I don't know what a guy's mind sounds like. But if I had to guess it'd be like that.

love that he kissed her

yay he noticed enid cant wait until the next chapter

im lovin' it!!

for some reason, i keep getting the feeling that heather's going to use benj.

keep updating!!

i really want enid to stay with benj im all for that

Wow! This is really interesting! A little cliche with the whole super hot girl and the geeky best friend, but other than that it's really good.
Benj is pretty hyperbolic, and yes, he is definitely overlooking Enid.
Oh, and every good story needs its grade A klutz; always makes things more interesting. Haha. :)
Subscribed!

i really like this story hope u make more soon

wow, i love it already! keep it comin! benj so cute with his highskool crush!... >//< *aww*

Normally, I am not one for original fiction, but this is cute. I'm subscribing.