Shattering Crystals - Comments

Personally, I think this is the best chapter to date... although that may have to do with the fact that I edited it and everything ;D

what an awesome chapter its a great ending it makes me want to read more!!!! so commentX3

... is aaron dead?! WHAT HAPPENED?! OH MY GOOOOD.

"the action looks strange on a bird." well ... yeah? and poor dean :( i still hate elise, but whateeever. :DD

MOOOORE.

My favorite character so far in the story would be Elise. It's Elise because she's different ffrom all the others, and was brought up in a different enviroment.

my fave is probs...diana shes cool i like her, NOW POST CHAP 49!!! PLZZZZ

I'M GOING TO KEEP WRITING IN BILLY MAYES BECAUSE OF MY FINGER.
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I REALLY LIKE ALL OF YOUR DETAILS AND IT IS THE PERFECT LENGTH(: HAHA YOU KNOW HOW I AM WITH THAT...ANYWAY I LOVE WHAT YOU DID WITH IT AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT'S BEHIND THE WALL <3

DUDE THIS IS AWESOME. FIRST UPDATE IN A WEEK.

AND I LIKE VOLCANOES.

there. no more capital letters. uh, this was kind of bommmb! i love how lorraine is like, in charge xD and elise "Trips into La La Land" way to be, elise, way to be. xD

moreee?

UPDATE!!!! plzzzzz i is begging u!!!!

I AGREE WITH THE NINJA I NEED MORE CHAPTERS SO I WILL NOT GO INSANE!!!

picture 2 , defininetly

picture 2 , defininetly

Chelsea is dead. Ha.

And Leilani is pretty now. Yay!!!

and you should update again, cause you said you were gonna like, finish by november. love you dana!

OMG. I was right about Leilani!!! But she's so different and philisophophpical! *<--not a typo*
Great job so far and I'm always here if ya need help with details <3

Thank you kiiiindly for the dedication <3 I love you even more than I did before(:

i like 2. its so haunting and eerie yet beautiful.

ahh chelsea was kill-ed and now is danas mom there?!?!?!?!

My first thought was that Chelsea died but maybe she went into a coma? I'm such an optimist.

I'm guessing that Chelsea is dead, and the girl is Leilani.

just saying (:

Great job on this one...now just 18 more to go ;D

I think the person is either Dana's friend Leilani, because she's all Hawaiian and stuff, or a new member of her crew

Nice dedication :p And I loved the way you ended that chapter, like how we don't know if they succeed or if they just turn her brain to mush(: haha Anyway I like the possible-layout picture. The lighting and fades in it make it really cool and interesting, and it would be good inspiration for a story...
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Dude, i sort of love this (: again. all over again.