Shattering Crystals - Comments

and i completely agree with katieeee cuz its a perfect ending :DDD

i love this book and i love chap 44 y dont u like it so much?
its cool i can wait fr chap 45!!

Personally, I like that chapter. The ending was perfect(: And you actually had some good details this time so kudos to you <3

HOLY BAT CAKES. (such a loser) WHO'S THAT PERSON WHO'S THERE?! :OOOO i have to know! i love connor. xD "i saw fire, and smoke and stuff."

MOOOOORREEE

*DEAN deserves better. sorry <3

You wanted a real comment so...here it is. But no promises.
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I think I would get along best with Lorraine, just because I think she's most like me and has the same tendencies and habits. (kind of? I just said that 'cause it sounded like I knew what I was talking about.) Anyway, she's just nice and tends to gossip a liiiitle *guilty face* and is pretty outspoken...and I respect that. Lorraine's cool(: OH! Or Wessley. He has a hot name. But he's a manwhore. So nevermind. Wait! Sorry. He's still hot. I choose Wessley.
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Personally, I think I'd hate living with Elise the most. She's just stuck-up and haughty and hates my favorite character so she can kiss my tush. I don't like the way she carries herself, thinking she's all that and everything. And she should give Dean a CHANCE! Wait...Dead deserves better, nevermind.
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And there you have it. I can actually put effort into a comment(: <3

I'd get alone best with Cody, cause he's ridicilious like me. and I'd probably kill Elise, so ...

and yes, this was a good chappter. nice work, dana !

...update.

I'm commenting. Happy now?

"Yes," I say, regaining the power to form full length sentences. "Connor and WEssley are Earthborns. Non-magic. We can only take one with us."

^^Mistake in Wessley's name

Super short!!! But I LOVELOVELOVEEE this chapter :) It's my new favorite <3

this.is.awesome.

That was pretty good...you could (AGAIN) use more description...but you'll add that later of course ;D <3

Lurved the ending :) CLIFFHANGER!!!!!

You will finish by November, cause I'm gonna nag you xD

but this chapter was good, needs more descriptions !!

oh elise ... how i hate you :)

You will TOTALLY finish by November ;D

And this chapter was ok... but you could use more descriptions...like what did Dana talk to Conner about? More about Dean and Elise? All that good shtuff :) <3

My least favorite is Lynda. She annoys the pants off of me (although I know you like that) ;D <3

Awh :) That chapter was beautifully cheesy.

You know where I stand on the least favorite character thing. I believe my made up words explain my extreme hate for Elise. Just saying. :D

I like the fun fact at the the end :)

Only finished the first three chapters so far, but I'll comment again when I finish.
This thing is long!

Umm...Dean and Dana...Lorraine and Cody...Conner gets no one...Elise and Ashley :D haha My favorite character so far is Lorraine. Because I lobe her. <3

Chapter 19 at the bottom you said "next to Conner's room" instead of Cody's room. I thought you might want to know.