Holy effing crap! Oh the things we do to ourselves. *sigh*
How could Jess and Jimmy do that? How could Jimmy just give in to his body like that? I thought he had more control than that. And see what's it done to them? It's ripped them apart. I'm not liking it. And now she's run off!! No no no no no!!!!! She can't run off! Brian and Jimmy need her! Why does she think she'll harm them? It makes no sense. *sigh*
You know I really love your writing, but its so good it drive me insane with all the emotions and complexity of your characters. Please update soon! :D
Oh yeah, Johnny would definitely take the shotgun position. Sounds just like him ;P
Okay so you know how I wanted Jess and Brian to be together....well now I'm kinda liking her with Jimmy. I mean he's so protective of her and actually pays attention to her. But I guess Brian does that too. So...UGH! I don't know. I'm confused...again. You have a way of doing this to me, but its the beautiful kind of confused so its the good kind. :)
Why would Jess think she is hurting people? That's just ridiculous. Hopefully someone can talk her out of it.
Oh and Val is the great big sis on tour for the guys. I think they need that actually. :)
Oh great. Haha. Just what I need...overlooked emotions. *sigh* You're seriously killing me here. I'm trying to make predictions in my head about how this is going to go and every chapter seems to kill it more and more. *sigh* You're gonna make me crazy. See, now I'm insane and dying. That must mean you're one heck of a writer ;)
I'm trying to figure out Jimmy's prince sentence too. I don't get it. So he wants to be married to her? Guess that means he's falling in love with her though he won't tell anyone. And then you have Brian who is obviously in love with her but keeps screwing it up at every turn. I feel bad for him. I really do. I just hope this all works out without too much heartache. Though I'm sure you'll have me guessing until the end.
Oh, and Zacky and Coral are too cute! He stayed up all night just talking to her? Aww!! I smell l-o-v-e ;)
This made me sad that they are fighting. I don't want them fighting. That's no good. :( He just needs to tell her that he does loves her still. That's all there is to it. And you are so mean! Telling us that threads will get frayed and we'll have to see which ones last and which ones don't. That's mean! You want to torture me don't you? :( Well I can't wait to see what your beautiful mind has in store for us. :) Update soon!
That at least explains where Jimmy was. Why didn't Jimmy wait for her? I know this marriage was a bit of a shock and all, but since he's more or less admitted that he's happy, why did he run off to eat without her?
I think that Snow and Blue (Berries) brought up a great point. I mean if they aren't married except on paper then why do they still wear the rings? Hm...interesting point to ponder. And of course Jess would've told Jimmy had it not been for an interruption at an inopportune time. *sigh* Isn't that how it always goes? Anywho, it was great to get a taste of her friends from Australia in this chapter. Coral is quite a character. Haha! I think that Zacky has a new crush. I mean dang did he go all mushy as she screamed at him with love and adoration. Haha!! I can't wait to see how they come into play more in the story. Knowing you and your brilliance I will probably not be able to guess it :D
Lastly, 'unknowingly lovestruck'....now who is Val referring to there? Jess and Brian or Jess and Jimmy? That's a good question and I hope to have it answered hopefully shortly but I can wait if its not for a bit yet. :) I do have SOME patience. haha!
How could Jess and Jimmy do that? How could Jimmy just give in to his body like that? I thought he had more control than that. And see what's it done to them? It's ripped them apart. I'm not liking it. And now she's run off!! No no no no no!!!!! She can't run off! Brian and Jimmy need her! Why does she think she'll harm them? It makes no sense. *sigh*
You know I really love your writing, but its so good it drive me insane with all the emotions and complexity of your characters. Please update soon! :D